[K18 - Hoth - TT] Triumvite soldier introduction: Mark Lemrik

[Commander Aufik]

*Your entry has earned 2 XP*

,,Your next mission is on Hoth, you need to stop the pirates that have their camp on the surface. They could potentialy be a treath to the base we have there" said the general. ,,I believe you once already been on Hoth as an Imperiliast am i right?" 

,,Yes, you are. I was a part of attack on the rebels base. Whats the armory?" Mark asked. ,, Check the locker."

 

Nice, i like those. What troops I'm with?" ,,Some local troops from that base, pack your things, theres a ship waiting for you."

 

[Brickwolf]

Nice build, I like the weapon´s locker.

[Commander Aufik]

Thank you, I really wanted to build one, from the moment I saw the one in Mandalorian

[Darth Bjorn]

Great first entry! The weapons locker is a great idea - I know it was mentioned before, but I have to second that the walls could be a bit taller... ;)

[Commander Aufik]

10 hours ago, Darth Bjorn said:

Great first entry! The weapons locker is a great idea - I know it was mentioned before, but I have to second that the walls could be a bit taller... ;)

Yeah, i know. The walls are just too small, I will make them taller next time!

[halixon]

I love that gun cabinet, and nice use of the trans blue boulder for a holo!

[Bociephus]

On 12/18/2020 at 12:52 PM, Commander Aufik said:

Thank you, I really wanted to build one, from the moment I saw the one in Mandalorian

Nicely done. Makes me want to include one in all my future Imperial mocs. 

[marvelBoy123]

Love the weapons cabinet, a nice first build!

[Commander Aufik]

Thank you all guys!

[Ross Fisher]

I like your fig builds. It would be good if you can build your scenery in a way that let's them face forward. I know I'm not innocent here, but particularly in early builds it helps us to get to know your character. 

[Commander Aufik]

58 minutes ago, Ross Fisher said:

I like your fig builds. It would be good if you can build your scenery in a way that let's them face forward. I know I'm not innocent here, but particularly in early builds it helps us to get to know your character. 

Well, you are right, thanks for the advice.

[dvogon]

Interesting build. I think the best part is the weapons cabinet, but I think you could have done it complete by making the walls taller.

[MKJoshA]

As others have said, the weapons locker really makes this build. Tall walls will help, fig placement will help. But you're off to a great start!