Nicotoa Posted January 4, 2021 Posted January 4, 2021 *Your entry has earned 10 XP* Coruscant have always been busy, and now more than ever with the Life day happening. Decorations hanged from the windows, holo-advertising in the streets... And yet, something odd was still happening, as usual. Reports speaks of a cloaked figure clad in Imperial armor being chased by a Black Sun mercenary in the lower levels of the planet. Spoiler Quote
marvelBoy123 Posted January 4, 2021 Posted January 4, 2021 I like the urban vibe and sense of action. I think the photographs would benefit from better lighting though. Quote
Nicotoa Posted January 4, 2021 Author Posted January 4, 2021 1 hour ago, marvelBoy123 said: I like the urban vibe and sense of action. I think the photographs would benefit from better lighting though. Thanks for your feedback ! Lighting is my biggest issue for now, but I hope I'll be able to fix it all soon. Quote
RocketBoy Posted January 4, 2021 Posted January 4, 2021 There's some great elements here: the tiling, the variety of colors for the urban environment, the action! My feedback would be: the lighting, but you already know that. I also might have left off that white strip around the buildings, just for the sake of simplicity and making everything read a little clearer. Especially when I'm working with lots of bright colors, I find that keeping my core/foundation colors simple is important to keeping it from feeling cluttered. Great work! Quote
Ross Fisher Posted January 4, 2021 Posted January 4, 2021 I like the use of colour, but there might be a few too many bright colours in this for it to work well. Looking forward to seeing what you do next! Quote
Darth Bjorn Posted January 5, 2021 Posted January 5, 2021 A little too busy with all the things going on color/action/detail, but super cool to se you putting some Aurebesh in there... Quote
dvogon Posted January 7, 2021 Posted January 7, 2021 Nice build! A colorful action scene is so Coruscant! For the lighting, if done in an interior, it's better to add some lamps focusing on the build for increasing the lighting. Quote
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