pombe Posted January 4, 2021 Posted January 4, 2021 *Your entry has earned 4 XP* Major Characters Spoiler Tini and her crew They are members of the Red Moon Squadron, a faction within the Confederacy of Free Systems. Tini Jawa celebrity chef famous for her delicious taco. Due to her speech disability, she can only say the word "utinni". Squiggly Duros saucier and Tini's sous chef. He's famous for his delicious secret sauce that he puts in Tini's taco. Chiquita Albino Wookiee pâtissière and Tini's pastry chef. She's famous for her creative use of Jawa juice. Mynock Four A pilot for the Confederacy who follows Tini so he can eat her taco. Nub and Da Sausage Boyz Nub is an Ewok celebrity chef whose sausage is famous for being extra thick and full of delicious goodness. Due to his speech disability, he can only say the word "yub". Nub and Tini were rivals at the culinary academy, and now Nub seeks to prove that his sausage is more delicious than Tini's taco. Da Sausage Boyz are Nub's cooking crew and enforcer thugs. (credit goes to goatman461 for the creation of Nub) Special Ops Trooper TK-8554, of Moff Pyerce's forces, tracks Tini, the Jawa celebrity chef, to beachfront property on Mustafar, but finds the place abandoned. What could Tini have possibly been up to here? Spoiler Quote
marvelBoy123 Posted January 4, 2021 Posted January 4, 2021 Nice build! The texture of the building and lava look really good. Not a massive fan of the narrative - I love your chef character but this just seems a little far fetched. Quote
Ross Fisher Posted January 4, 2021 Posted January 4, 2021 9 hours ago, marvelBoy123 said: this just seems a little far fetched Oh @marvelBoy123, you wanted this to be grounded in reality? Just out of interest, did the backpack and belt combine well for you? I've really been struggling to get them to play well together. Quote
marvelBoy123 Posted January 4, 2021 Posted January 4, 2021 1 minute ago, Ross Fisher said: Oh @marvelBoy123, you wanted this to be grounded in reality? Just out of interest, did the backpack and belt combine well for you? I've really been struggling to get them to play well together. The idea of a lone individual tracking down a target the whole way across the galaxy doesn't fit with what we see in star wars particularly from the empire - I'd prefer to see some kind of a group of specialists. If pyerce is prepared to send forces across the galaxy the why only send one trooper, the guy has the resources to blockade entire planets. Just my opinion but I preferred the previous narratives. As for the belt and jetpack, I used the combo in my CAT B as well and can't remember having any problems with it. Quote
Denal31 Posted January 6, 2021 Posted January 6, 2021 (edited) I hope they have lava insurance. I dig the lava effect that you've created here. Edited January 6, 2021 by Denal31 Quote
MKJoshA Posted January 7, 2021 Posted January 7, 2021 I think the floor should be at least 1 plate higher than the lava. But maybe that's just me. Quote
dvogon Posted January 7, 2021 Posted January 7, 2021 The lava effect is fine, but somehow the overall build seems too flat (horizontal and vertical) Quote
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