[Bounty] [J15 - Ring of Kafrene-MA] In the midst of chaos, there is also opportunity.

[MayItBe]

*Your entry has scored 8XP*

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Security Camera #523: Landing Pad C44
Voice transmission only. Unauthorised access.
Time of the recording: 13:33
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Male Voice#1:  Alright, remind me what is the plan.
Male Voice#2: I thought I've explained it already. You take the long route, and make sure we have a backup if things get messy. Me and Iana go to the provided location and we breach in the building. We either find the target or intel to locate him. Swift in and out.
Female Voice#1: Messy? You told me to bring two crates of explosives. Only to be optional?
Male Voice#2: Bounty is dead or alive. It have no specifications about casualties. We jut need to complete the mission. This is the way.
Male Voice#1: Fine for me. See you on the rendezvous. This is the way.
Female Voice#1: <with discontent> This is the way.

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<Transmission ended>

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Edited January 25, 2022 by RocketBoy

[RocketBoy]

Perfectly doing the chaos and bustle of Kafrene! Next time, you might make the ground one color and the buildings a different color, just to differentiate them a little more. (In this case, probably just making all the ground lbg.)

OH! Also, consider where your camera will be when you do your build. You probably want to avoid having the backs of stalls toward the camera, and just keep stalls where the camera will see the most presentable side.

I think you're pretty likely to score in the 7-10 range with this, so I'd start work on your second if I was you!

Edited January 12, 2022 by RocketBoy

[halixon]

This is a very interesting build! Love the crowds, and that background paper is a nice touch

[n1majneb]

I really think, as mentioned, you've captured the general busyness of Kafrene very well. The expression's on the faces of the people suggestive of these people following their own narratives.
I think the placement of those watching the crowds and looking out for the bounty is done very well.

[Brickwolf]

Great bustling scene, nice details!

[MayItBe]

On 1/12/2022 at 3:49 PM, RocketBoy said:

Perfectly doing the chaos and bustle of Kafrene! Next time, you might make the ground one color and the buildings a different color, just to differentiate them a little more. (In this case, probably just making all the ground lbg.)

OH! Also, consider where your camera will be when you do your build. You probably want to avoid having the backs of stalls toward the camera, and just keep stalls where the camera will see the most presentable side.

I think you're pretty likely to score in the 7-10 range with this, so I'd start work on your second if I was you!

Huge thanks for feedback! Really appreciated. I never thought that i should build with camera in mind. I struggled to make good pics of this build, now i know why :)
This tip should be pinned for all builders, especially the new ones! 

On 1/13/2022 at 11:52 PM, halixon said:

This is a very interesting build! Love the crowds, and that background paper is a nice touch

Thanks! That paper is in fact neoprene mat for X-wing miniatures game :D

On 1/14/2022 at 9:39 AM, n1majneb said:

I really think, as mentioned, you've captured the general busyness of Kafrene very well. The expression's on the faces of the people suggestive of these people following their own narratives.
I think the placement of those watching the crowds and looking out for the bounty is done very well.

Thank you! I'm happy it's visible, as I put every miniature with their own little story. A couple in love, group of engineers going to work, and even a rebel pilot stressing out not to be seen by the Stormtroopers.

On 1/14/2022 at 9:00 PM, Brickwolf said:

Great bustling scene, nice details!

Thanks!