BoN hired Plighia to assist Juores's army in a raid to retrieve narcotics in a factory that was supposed to have been decommissioned. But the new information seems to describe a new situation, and the Juores Cartel has many men in that particular shed. What's going to be happening? The men have now been deployed, it is time to take action.

KABOOM!!

 

Plighia Army: black soldiers; Juores Army: green soldiers.

Edited August 18, 20222 yr by ParmBrick

Nice. I like the conveyor belt and the technical stuff on the outside walls, though the building seems a little bit too small for what I think you were trying to do. Like on the last picture, one of his feet isn't even touching the ground. Maybe you should make your buildings a little bigger in the future, so you can really convey the scenes you want to. This one seems a little cramped. Though there are so many little details I love, I can't even mention them all. One more thing. I don't want to be the guy to be like "Akshually"... but thats not how scopes work. If you want to do a P.O.V shot of the sniper, maybe have the scope take up most of the image, and only have the target in the sights. To end on a good note, I laughed out loud when I saw that you had used a female suit for the Mafia guy. Still, a very nice build.

21 minutes ago, Mirror1810 said:

Nice. I like the conveyor belt and the technical stuff on the outside walls, though the building seems a little bit too small for what I think you were trying to do. Like on the last picture, one of his feet isn't even touching the ground. Maybe you should make your buildings a little bigger in the future, so you can really convey the scenes you want to. This one seems a little cramped. Though there are so many little details I love, I can't even mention them all. One more thing. I don't want to be the guy to be like "Akshually"... but thats not how scopes work. If you want to do a P.O.V shot of the sniper, maybe have the scope take up most of the image, and only have the target in the sights. To end on a good note, I laughed out loud when I saw that you had used a female suit for the Mafia guy. Still, a very nice build.

Thank you very much! That's it, you're right when you said that building is a little too small, but I had to make it like this because the space in my photoset is quite tight, and I risked that my room could be seen in the photos  As for the scope, you are also right about that, but I did it this way to convey the idea that the narcos was taken out by a sniper, and to show the surrounding environment. Obviously I will try to improve on these points of yours, and perhaps, to optimize the spaces, organize the interiors of my mocs in order to avoid these situations in which "it seems not to enter". However, I am glad that you liked the details included and the idea of an industrial activity to refine drugs.

Great industrial facility!

7 minutes ago, ParmBrick said:

Thank you very much! That's it, you're right when you said that building is a little too small, but I had to make it like this because the space in my photoset is quite tight, and I risked that my room could be seen in the photos  As for the scope, you are also right about that, but I did it this way to convey the idea that the narcos was taken out by a sniper, and to show the surrounding environment. Obviously I will try to improve on these points of yours, and perhaps, to optimize the spaces, organize the interiors of my mocs in order to avoid these situations in which "it seems not to enter". However, I am glad that you liked the details included and the idea of an industrial activity to refine drugs.

Those are good points. As an idea for sniper fire in the future, how about you make a picture of the target, alive, with the whole-screen-scope, then another picture of the target, dead, with no scope effect, both from the same angle. Though thats just an idea, you don't have to do it. Still, the little details more then make up for the cramped interior. Like, that Coffee machine made my evening. Though... why would there be an active electrical connection for an abandoned factory? Or does this cartel just have half a Million Hamsters in the basement, producing Power for the drug production, computers and kitchen equipment? 

36 minutes ago, Mirror1810 said:

Those are good points. As an idea for sniper fire in the future, how about you make a picture of the target, alive, with the whole-screen-scope, then another picture of the target, dead, with no scope effect, both from the same angle. Though thats just an idea, you don't have to do it. Still, the little details more then make up for the cramped interior. Like, that Coffee machine made my evening. Though... why would there be an active electrical connection for an abandoned factory? Or does this cartel just have half a Million Hamsters in the basement, producing Power for the drug production, computers and kitchen equipment? 

Underground cable, as it was intended to be placed in a abandoned industrial area Btw, this moc is obviously not perfect, they are all details that one cannot remember to insert, something will have to be missing xD but thanks again to remeber me those, so I can improve myself

34 minutes ago, ParmBrick said:

Underground cable, as it was intended to be placed in a abandoned industrial area Btw, this moc is obviously not perfect, they are all details that one cannot remember to insert, something will have to be missing xD but thanks again to remeber me those, so I can improve myself

Its ok, I didn't mean to say it was bad, I was just wondering.

Great work on the factory. The amount of internal and external details are wonderful. How the action goes down really adds too. "I want a lawyer!"

On 8/18/2022 at 9:38 PM, Brickwolf said:

Great industrial facility!

Thank you! Appreciated

10 hours ago, Feuer Zug said:

Great work on the factory. The amount of internal and external details are wonderful. How the action goes down really adds too. "I want a lawyer!"

Thank you too! Always kind I put a lot of effort in this one, I wanted to represent something original, which has not been built often during these years of play, I'm glad you liked it!  I would like to be more active, create and build things like this more often because they give me a lot of satisfaction, but unfortunately the free time at my disposal is not much. Let's hope for better times. Luckily, at least there are the creations of everyone to cheer me up

You earned 25 bucks. 

INTEL: Following the raid, it is determined that the shipping crate which the narcotics were originally transported in came to Juores on a freighter. Unfortunately, the manifest was intentionally inaccurate to show the origin.