Max_Lego Posted December 6, 2023 Posted December 6, 2023 *Your entry has earned 11 XP (S:5, T:3, A:3) + 4 bonus XP for a total of 15XP Pavo Prime was one of the earliest planets to join the Galactic Republic, and its population was considered to be one of the most loyal to the Imperial cause. Although it wasn't that what's called a waterworld, it was partially covered with seas, which housed lots of different kinds of fish. To protect the seas, the Imperial Navy (yes, the Galactic Empire has got a Navy) deployed ships patrolling on the surface, the flagship being the gorgeous Galactic Empire battleship. The Galactic Empire was the perfect watercraft in this world, where blasters are the primary weapon. It was heavily armed with three 3-barreled turbolaser turrets, 6 minor blaster turrets and protected by a powerful shield capable of withstanding any orbital bombardment. Right now, it was evening. It was the end of the first day of the battleship's new commander - the mysterious Commissar Rax. No one knew where he came from. He just came on board on his Lambda shuttle, had a little talk with the ship's then-commander and had him arrested, using listening devices to expose him to the crew as a traitor, who was planning to order the local garrison to surrender to the New Republic. Everyone heard the commander's words, and there was no doubt the accusations were valid; the trial was set for tomorrow morning. Gloating his victory, the successful Commissar Rax was moving his stuff to his new commander's headquarters. - I see you've got lots of interesting stuff here, sir, - Captain Kuzy said, looking into the Commissar's boxes, - here are some state symbols... - Please be careful with those computers, TK!.. Yeah, there are, and they include a state flag, two golden crests and even a 501st legion sdandard! How cool is that? And please call me Comrade the Political Director, - the Commissar answered. - Understood, Comrade the Political Director - Kuzy answered, wondering where the weirdo could possibly get the 501st standard, - and these plants are?.. - Just plants. Never mind. - And what's in that box? An ancient Sith helmet, some books and... - Be careful with these! They are ancient Sith manuscripts! I rescued them from the Imperial library before Coruscant fell to the Rebellion. Oh, and that's a Sith holocron. Beautiful, isn't it? - the Commissar showed the holocron to his new subordinates. - How can you use this thing, Comrade the Political Director? - Commander Grosh asked, - Are you?.. - No, sadly I am not - the Commissar replied, - but don't worry, the Sith will return. Someday... - Sorry for the question, Comrade the Political Director, - the stormtrooper asked, - but are you really such a Sith supporter? - I'm more than just that, - Rax said sinisterly, - I'm a real fossil, yet flesh-and-bone Sith Cultist! Under my command, the old Empire will survive at least on this planet... Until someone worthy of talking the Emperor's place shows up! All right, thanks for your help, comrades! Make sure to sleep well, because tomorrow morning, we have a lot of work to do! He-he... Quote
Professor Thaum Posted December 7, 2023 Posted December 7, 2023 Very, very interesting intro... I will not develop yet... but I'm delighted ! Gorgeous microwarship ! Quote
Yperio_Bricks Posted December 7, 2023 Posted December 7, 2023 I like the story! Although Rax's big grin maybe reduces his authority a little bit Quote
Max_Lego Posted December 7, 2023 Author Posted December 7, 2023 5 minutes ago, Yperio_Bricks said: I like the story! Although Rax's big grin maybe reduces his authority a little bit Thank you, @Professor Thaum and @Yperio_Bricks! The character is supposed to have a big grin. But yes, he looks too cheerful. The guy just tries to be friendly his new subordinates. Just wait until someone fails him... Quote
Professor Thaum Posted December 7, 2023 Posted December 7, 2023 He just look fine I love him very much The grin is ad hoc ! Quote
MKJoshA Posted December 29, 2023 Posted December 29, 2023 How did I miss this before? Your story is fantastic! I can't wait to see more of the rise of the Sith. Quote
Max_Lego Posted December 29, 2023 Author Posted December 29, 2023 1 hour ago, MKJoshA said: How did I miss this before? Your story is fantastic! I can't wait to see more of the rise of the Sith. Thank you! Sadly, if the Sith will rise here, it will contradict the Legends continuity. In fact, my original plan will just turn everything upside down... So I have to be careful with my storyline Quote
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