I made this MOC today... It is a prototype that the clones would use to destroy the Seperist ships.

I like it but I think that it needs a little more detail adding to it, especially at the front. The white 2x4 needs slopes around it and the black plate under it should probably be bley (or whichever grey you used). Also, you should try adding a landing gear to it. Sorry if I sound harsh.

I like it but I think that it needs a little more detail adding to it, especially at the front. The white 2x4 needs slopes around it and the black plate under it should probably be bley (or whichever grey you used). Also, you should try adding a landing gear to it. Sorry if I sound harsh.

Thanks! Now some of the things you said I can disagree with.

First, I agree with more detail. I am currently modding it right now.

And I do have landing gear on it. The two little grey technic beams on the bottom fold down. They hold the front end up, where the engines hold the back up.

I'm going to echo commanderbly's comments a little bit. It needs some more details. Can't wait to see the improvements you're currently working on.

My biggest problem is the name. It just doesn't look like a bomber. When I hear bomber, I think bulky, with lots of room to hold ordinance, missiles, torpedoes, etc. This ship looks more like a heavy fighter to me: plenty of firepower, might be able to take on a small capital ship (think Corvette size), but nothing that could take on a medium or large capital ship.

Still, I do like the overall design.

EDIT: One more thing I wanted to ask. Did you include any controls in the cockpit? It's always a nice detail to add. Not sure if you have any room, though.

Edited July 24, 200816 yr by Walter Kovacs

replace the big weel things with actual thrusters, that and add more detail.

EDIT: 100 posts Woohoo!!!!!

Edited July 24, 200816 yr by yorkiejim

I'm going to echo commanderbly's comments a little bit. It needs some more details. Can't wait to see the improvements you're currently working on.

My biggest problem is the name. It just doesn't look like a bomber. When I hear bomber, I think bulky, with lots of room to hold ordinance, missiles, torpedoes, etc. This ship looks more like a heavy fighter to me: plenty of firepower, might be able to take on a small capital ship (think Corvette size), but nothing that could take on a medium or large capital ship.

Still, I do like the overall design.

EDIT: One more thing I wanted to ask. Did you include any controls in the cockpit? It's always a nice detail to add. Not sure if you have any room, though.

Thanks!

Hmm, agreed. I am thinking of making it a clone E-wing...

And yes, it has controls. A jackhammer as a joystickand a green panel. However, it was kinda hard with that kind of cockpit...

replace the big weel things with actual thrusters, that and add more detail.

EDIT: 100 posts Woohoo!!!!!

I was thinking of doing that...

yeah, the big weels detract from the look of the ship.

Edited July 24, 200816 yr by yorkiejim

Behold the NEW clone bomber!