[Q10 - M] A simple meeting to start

[Jody Meyer]

Q10 Radon by Meyerj, on Flickr

Sorry for late posting. this was to tie in with @Sentinel_Brix, hope it is ok. picture takes you to video. thank you for looking.

 

[Yperio_Bricks]

Magnificent corpulence So good!

I really like your story and the comic style. Although i very much like the ships at the end, my favorite part has to be the giant hallway! Very inspiring, as it makes me want to build something like this in the future too!

And it's great to see some familiar Light Side characters in this collab with @Sentinel_Brix

 

But you really should add a line, explaining that the picture links to a video on flickr. Otherwise it is a bit confusing.

[Sentinel_Brix]

First of all, thank you @Jody Meyer for taking the steering wheel on the Raiders story and contributing to it. Great to see the own characters unfold in another build! It was not easy for sure to render the 'Bothan' head. 

All in all it's a nice little movie with all the scenes in those different environments. I also like the hallway and Mama the Hutt approaching the heroes the most. 

Just one remark to the speed. If you could make the image transitions with more text on the page slower, the readers would appreciate 

 

[Jody Meyer]

21 hours ago, Sentinel_Brix said:

First of all, thank you @Jody Meyer for taking the steering wheel on the Raiders story and contributing to it. Great to see the own characters unfold in another build! It was not easy for sure to render the 'Bothan' head. 

All in all it's a nice little movie with all the scenes in those different environments. I also like the hallway and Mama the Hutt approaching the heroes the most. 

Just one remark to the speed. If you could make the image transitions with more text on the page slower, the readers would appreciate 

 

yes  i agree,  i played with the timming for the text for ever, I had made a small movie but could not upload, to big.