SWCG: End of season one

-JD- · January 5, 2009

Hmmm. Lets say 2 as then there is more teamwork for the characters in the story. Can't wait to see it finished! :thumbup:

Oky · January 6, 2009

And now, for your enjoyment...

An exlcusive deleted scene from Chapter 1 of the first Season of the SWCG!

This was supposed to take place between this and this post. Why did it get deleted? Because JimButcher and Lt. Col. Thok beat me to posting that part of the story. :hmpf_bad: :tongue: Unfortunately, I had already made the MOC and taken pictures of it. So, to make them not go to waste, I thought I'll post them here and now. :wink: Here you go:

After Jim blew up the hover transport, the three emerged from their cover spot.

They walked over to the gunner of the crashed hover transport to see if he was still alive. Having a wounded leg, Jim was limping. He used his nail gun as a support.

It turned out that the guy from the hover transport was heavily wounded, but still alive. They questioned him and found out that the drug lord was on his way to Utapau.

Afterward, Oky Wan repaired the fuel tank of the speederbike and Annix refilled it with leftover fuel from the hover transport, while Jim put bandages from the speeder's first-aid kit on his injured leg.

When they were done, they all got on the speederbike and took off.

They headed toward the spot where the battle had started and where the transport had come from.

First, Oky Wan and Annix dropped Jim off to his troops. He thanked the two for their help and told them to meet him on Utapau if they wanted to continue to help. Of course, they agreed. Then Oky and Annix took off again.

They returned to the spot where Oky Wan starfighter was parked.

There, they finished their deal, and Oky Wan quickly installed the new parts, while Moda left on the speeder bike to get to his own ship. Oky Wan rebooted his astromech and climbed into the cockpit. He took off and set course for Utapau.

From there on, it would have continued with the events in this post.

I hope you liked it. :classic: I also have pics for the finale of Chapter 4 that never made it into the thread because Hinckley closed it so quickly. :hmpf_bad: I might post a copy of the last post of season 1 here with the pics later.

Edited January 8, 2009 by Oky Wan Kenobi

-JD- · January 6, 2009

I have finished the ship at last! :thumbup: I'll be adding pictures to brickshelf later today.

-JD- · January 7, 2009

Will admins tell me off if I add largish pictures to this thread, or will they let me off? I added all the pictures to brickshelf and then realized they were too big :sceptic: . The pictures don't make sense without desriptions. :hmpf_bad:

simonjedi · January 7, 2009

So, did we decide on which ship is going to be our HQ now or not?
Once we decide that, we can start thinking of a name for it.

i thought we were "mercenaries" but for the republic only, we travel around in our own ship and meet up with republic battle fleets, to get missions ect.

Bit like the twilight from the CW is, except bigger and we all live in it.

Also I've been thinking ideas for the opening of the chapter 2 and this is what i've thought .

We've been asked to investigate some separatist research facility on the planet, but because the planet is controlled by mercenaries, (JlBlue will be on the planet) we have to meet up with a republic battle fleet to get a new ship identification kit and cargo with tracking devices in them. we reach the fleet only to discover they've been destroyed by a mystery weapon D: (maybe)

we hunt for survivors and find Timbit (and other clones i guess.) something bad probably happens, and eventually meeet JlBlue on the planet.

opinions, suggestions ect. welcome

-JD- · January 7, 2009

Good ideas simonjedi. However, at some point can we end up back on Coruscant? I wanted to develop the plot with the bounty hunter. Maybe he and his pirate troops could posses the super weapon which destroyed the fleet in simon's suggestion.

Edited January 7, 2009 by Jammiedodger714

Oky · January 7, 2009

Will admins tell me off if I add largish pictures to this thread, or will they let me off? I added all the pictures to brickshelf and then realized they were too big . The pictures don't make sense without desriptions.

Well, considering that it is a rule for this entire site, yes, they probably will. So, please resize them, upload them again, and share them with us. :classic:

i thought we were "mercenaries" but for the republic only, we travel around in our own ship and meet up with republic battle fleets, to get missions ect.
Bit like the twilight from the CW is, except bigger and we all live in it.

So... What is it? JD's MOC?

Also I've been thinking ideas for the opening of the chapter 2 (...).

Isn't it a bit early to think about Chapter 2? Chapter 1 hasn't even started yet. :tongue:

Just to let you know, Jim and I have already roughly planned Season 2 out. And no, it wont be about a super weapon. That concept is getting a little old now, don't you agree?

HINT:

The object of interest in this season is something that has been suggested earlier in this thread.

:wink:

Edited January 7, 2009 by Oky Wan Kenobi

Bob · January 7, 2009

I'm considering going through the entire topic again, or if I should just wait.

The suspense is killing me though...

**Hinckley** · January 7, 2009

Will admins tell me off if I add largish pictures to this thread, or will they let me off? I added all the pictures to brickshelf and then realized they were too big . The pictures don't make sense without desriptions.

Well here's the Index of Tutorials. Perhaps you should take a minute and familiarize yourself with them since they'll help you a lot posting on this site...

Jlblue · January 7, 2009

(JlBlue will be on the planet)

I like that. Can I start out not part of the crew? Not be aligned with anybody in the beginning.

**JimBee** · January 7, 2009

I like that. Can I start out not part of the crew? Not be aligned with anybody in the beginning.

Well, hold on there. Like Oky Wan said, we have figured out a rough idea of how the season is going to be. But don't worry, anything can happen (figuratively speaking) between then and now, or even in the season itself. :wink:

Oky Wan has done his (voluntary) part ( :sweet: ) in the MOC index, so expect the complete index very soon.

simonjedi · January 8, 2009

As promised, here are the pics of Garviel in his S2 outfit.

and his jedi starfighter.

I have more pics of my JSF available if you want to see it.

Edited January 8, 2009 by simonjedi

-JD- · January 8, 2009

There are about...a gazillion photos. A slight exageration :tongue: . There are 25 I think. I have thought something up though:

I'll post the link to the picture and tell you about it under the link, and do the same for each photo. :thumbup:

Sorry, I just don't have the time to re-upload them. School work and coursework are filling up my evenings and weekends. :thumbdown:

JD

Btw, Garviel looks awesome in that costume! :thumbup: I may make some changes to my costume as well. Maybe a pauldron and a Kama.....

Edited January 8, 2009 by Jammiedodger714

simonjedi · January 8, 2009

And now, for your enjoyment...
An exlcusive deleted scene from Chapter 1 of the first Season of the SWCG!

This was supposed to take place between this and this post. Why did it get deleted? Because JimButcher and Lt. Col. Thok beat me to posting that part of the story. Unfortunately, I had already made the MOC and taken pictures of it. So, to make them not go to waste, I thought I'll post them here and now. Here you go:

{deleted scene}

:tongue: very funny pictures, especially the clone sweeping away the dead body. for "Having a wounded leg, Jim was humping." do you mean limping? because humping (british meaning anyway) means

having sex

which jim isn't

Oky Wan has done his (voluntary) part (default_satisfied.gif) in the MOC index, so expect the complete index very soon.

will there be a section for the biographies for all the characters who are dead (or not due to the ending) like MacK and brickbreaker, the Villians and maybe the secondary characters (named clones, the 2 prisoners in chapter 2)

e.g In memorial (the characters that didn't make it). The villians. supporting cast.

for example:

Bequin

[picture]

Biography

blah blah blah

current status: Dead

killed by Garviel Loken, on felucia with Adams lightsaber.

Garviel looks awesome in that costume!

Thanks! the outfit is the only thing i really like about CW Obi Wan

Oky · January 8, 2009

I'll post the link to the picture and tell you about it under the link, and do the same for each photo.

Sounds good. :thumbup: Can't wait.

Garviel looks awesome in that costume!

Seconded! :sweet:

I was thinking about using that torso too, but now that you're using it, it would be a little weird for me to use it too. :sceptic:

No matter. I am very satisfied with my outfit as it is now. Perhaps I should take a picture of my character for my biography.

Btw, simonjedi, my CW Obi Wan fig is a keychain mod, so I can't remove the legs, which means that I wont be able to give your character a kama. Hope that's OK. :classic:

I have more pics of my JSF available if you want to see it.

Hm... Wasn't it supposed to be heavily modified? I don't really see any modification, so unless those modifications are supposed to be more inside the starfighter, I would like to see some more pics, so that we can see the mods.

very funny pictures, especially the clone sweeping away the dead body.

Hehe, thanks! And thanks for noticing that little gag too. For those who don't recognize him, the dead guy is Mor Daeggar, the drug dealer. :wink:

For "Having a wounded leg, Jim was humping." do you mean limping? because humping (british meaning anyway) means

having sex

which jim isn't.

Oops! Erm, yeah, that's what I meant. :blush: Thanks.

Will there be a section for the biographies for all the characters who are dead (or not due to the ending) like MacK and brickbreaker, the Villians and maybe the secondary characters (named clones, the 2 prisoners in chapter 2)?

Well, there wasn't intended to be one, but if you want, we could add one. Let's see what Jim thinks about this.

While we're at it, why don't we also make a collection of all past banners for this game?

**JimBee** · January 8, 2009

very funny pictures, especially the clone sweeping away the dead body. for "Having a wounded leg, Jim was humping." do you mean limping? because humping (british meaning anyway) means

having sex

which jim isn't

:laugh:

will there be a section for the biographies for all the characters who are dead (or not due to the ending) like MacK and brickbreaker, the Villians and maybe the secondary characters (named clones, the 2 prisoners in chapter 2)

I was thinking about this, but the index is already a little long, don't you think? And the players that are no longer playing don't really need a bio. I want to keep the index as short as possible, but still a nice thing for reference, especially for new joiners.

While we're at it, why don't we also make a collection of all past banners for this game?

I was thinking about this, too, but there really is no need for them. This isn't director's cut, it's just an index. :tongue: I will put the current banner that specifies the current chapter (not the ones like Adam's, sorry) in, though.

simonjedi · January 9, 2009

I was thinking about using that torso too, but now that you're using it, it would be a little weird for me to use it too.
No matter. I am very satisfied with my outfit as it is now. Perhaps I should take a picture of my character for my biography.

Btw, simonjedi, my CW Obi Wan fig is a keychain mod, so I can't remove the legs, which means that I wont be able to give your character a kama. Hope that's OK.

I don't mind if you use the same torso, for pictures most of the armour is obscured by the karma anyway, so i could probably use a jedi robe torso, or have pictures of Garviel from behind. Don't worry about not being able to use it, the torso.

Hm... Wasn't it supposed to be heavily modified? I don't really see any modification, so unless those modifications are supposed to be more inside the starfighter, I would like to see some more pics, so that we can see the mods.

its more technical things anyway, story wise, (more lasers, hyperdrive) the changes to the outside is more subtle imo.

Well, there wasn't intended to be one, but if you want, we could add one. Let's see what Jim thinks about this.

I was thinking about this, but the index is already a little long, don't you think? And the players that are no longer playing don't really need a bio. I want to keep the index as short as possible, but still a nice thing for reference, especially for new joiners.

We should have at least one for the villians, and maybe the ex-players, if you want I'll do the 3 sections on the index. imo the characters and "previously on SWCG" should be seperate posts. Jim is right though, it'll be good for references.

-JD- · January 9, 2009

Star Wars Comic Game, The .............

Lets start with the full ship with panels on. (I made it to scale)

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3635677

Now the cockpit, which seats one pilot.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3635693

The missile launcher, which is controlled by the pilot. Flick fire, I know. :hmpf_bad: They were spares from the three V-19s I have,, so I had to use them somewhere.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3635707

The proton torpedos, controlled via the control room.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3625383

They have a hinge mechanism as well.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3635724

A rear turret controlled by members in the *drum roll* control room! There is one on both sides.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3635732

The upper turret.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3625378

The clone or whoever else is on it has an oxygen tank.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3625380

The back section with the docking area. The blue dome is a sheild protecting the life support.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3635790

The door hinges down so the pilot can get inside.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3625387

The docking mechanism.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3625395

Anakin pays a visit. The rod pulls out, so the ship can slot in place....

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3625396

Then goes back in, to lock the ship in position....

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3637278

The ship with most of the panels removed.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3637284

The control room, the vital part of the ship.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3637339

Jim and JD check out a rouge ship on the scanners. A clone pilot guards the cockpit.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3637340

Another set of controls.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3638683

A screen showing the rouge ship. MARSIAN ATTACK!!!!!!

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3637342

The conference room. pr0 and Adam practice their saber skills. The grey peice is where the holograms are projected.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3637347

The medical bay is the same, just people have moved around. KimT has been rescued from pirates in the lower levels of Coruscant.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3637352

The sleeping quarters haven't change either. Timbit has a nap while Oky and Thok argue over who sleeps where tonight. The trans orange grill is supposed to be a radiator/heater.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3638675

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3638681

A control panel by Jim's bed to alert him if there is trouble.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3638692

The clones are informed by Rex about the incoming Marsian Fighters. The room is the armoury/entrance and exit btw.

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3637357

My interpretation of Rex.

*pic being uploaded*

The pics are not public yet, but will be soon.

Hope you like it! The crew will modify the ship during the chapters so you can have your input.

JD

Edited January 9, 2009 by Jammiedodger714

simonjedi · January 11, 2009

The pics are still not public, can you host them on Flickr?

So... What is it? JD's MOC?

Well, seeing he's made the effort to make a ship for us then i think we should.

Just to let you know, Jim and I have already roughly planned Season 2 out. And no, it wont be about a super weapon. That concept is getting a little old now, don't you agree?

Fair enough, but its just an idea to get the 2 new players into the story.

-JD- · January 11, 2009

I do not trust flickr as I have seen many strange and offensive pictures and remarks. :hmpf_bad: :sadnew: Sorry.

They will be public in a day or two. I think it is because I added 30 or so pictures in one day. :thumbdown:

When they are public, I say again: If you have any advice and ideas for the ship, PLEASE POST!!!

JD

Btw, I have the Rep Attack Shuttle, 4 clone bps and 2 AATs, so now I can add more pictures of it in battle! :cry_happy: :thumbup:

Tim Bit · January 11, 2009

My personal fighter is about done but even when I do post pics it'll be a wip.

Can't wait for that gallery to go public to see your ship.

Bob · January 11, 2009

My ship is starting, to be honest, I haven't started contructing it yet :tongue:

-JD- · January 14, 2009

When shall we decide on a name?

Also, we could change the symbol to the rebel insignia. Its first apperance is in TFU, and none before. So that option is open. Perhaps we could become known across the galaxy and people use our symbol as a symbol of hope. That is what the rebel's insignia means anyway.

JD

Oky · January 14, 2009

After all these days, the pics are STILL not public, JD. :sceptic: Perhaps you should try it again or something. Uploading them to a different site like Flickr as simonjedi suggested might be a good idea too.

Btw, how long does it take you to upload the pic of Rex? :tongue:

When shall we decide on a name?

For your ship? Well, as of now, we don't even know what it looks like completely, so it's hard to tell.

Besides, you're the one who built it, so why don't you give it a name (or a couple of possible names) and we tell you if we approve or not?

Also, we could change the symbol to the rebel insignia. Its first apperance is in TFU, and none before. So that option is open. Perhaps we could become known across the galaxy and people use our symbol as a symbol of hope. That is what the rebel's insignia means anyway.

Sounds good. Makes more sense than using the Imperial insignia at least. :tongue: But I would still prefer it if we had the usual Republic one. I mean, we're still working for the Republic after all. :sceptic:

simonjedi · January 14, 2009

how about the almost circle sign?

this one:

4150px33.1108881472.jpg

Uploading them to a different site like Flickr as simonjedi suggested might be a good idea too.

or photobucket, afaik you can't comment on photobucket pics, because it still not yet public.

Besides, you're the one who built it, so why don't you give it a name (or a couple of possible names) and we tell you if we approve or not?

we should have a name that's season 1 injokey like Bequin's legacy, except not as lame.

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