Posted December 13, 200816 yr Story: Follow Cpt. Kirk and his First Mate Mr. Jonnyson through the different ages of piracy. On thier well-built, ill-fitted boat the Merry-Go these adventures don't let the day or age stop them from out doing Admiral Paddock and his Assistant Pvt. Morris. Each Day this week I'll release a picture of a different age of piracy. (Five Days) First Age: Classical (This was to show off that build technique....) Enjoy! -Zeph Edited December 20, 200816 yr by Zepher
December 13, 200816 yr Nice idea to post some pictures during the week so you are curious about how the story goes on. I like the build MOC but it may need some improvements: The Imperial guards are unarmed and don't really look upset about the small invasion. A textballoon would say: "Ah, welcome! You're just on time for dinner." It would be nicer when the guards are in panic or something. If it has to do with your story, forget what I said. Again, nice idea.
December 13, 200816 yr Author It's no so much a story. It's the same event each time. Sorry if there's any confusion though, I'll help explain. The pirates are getting away, and the Imperial is waiting for his assistant Pvt Morris, to bring him his weapon. Morris is just arriving, but to late! Thanks for the feed back!
December 14, 200816 yr I've been reading something somewhere ( probably the guidelines ) about MOC's: "The MOC's should be from the age of sail, so no steam punk." Although I like your MOC I don't know what to think about it because it doesn't really fit in the pirates theme. I can be totally incorrectly so please tell me if I do. Good MOC anyway and I love to see how the MOC slightly changes each age. Keep up the good work edit: some grammar mistakes. Edited December 14, 200816 yr by Cap'n Blackmoor
December 14, 200816 yr Author Pirates are still around today, so yeah, this fits into piracy! Thanks for the feedback though!
December 15, 200816 yr He will end up in a nice oak coffin when the Imperials get him! :pir-skull: Or maybe not... who knows.... I'm waiting with patience for the next episode.
December 15, 200816 yr Haha, it looks quite well. I like the patched up building, which stands there for ages already. It looks like the lighted path attracts pirates to the port. :pir-skull: The antenna in the corner shows you this MOC is modern - future, a nice addition. Only 1 flaw: the boat could be moderner, I see a piece in it which you used in the Steam punk age as well Great job so far and I'm curious how the voyage will be continued. Edited December 15, 200816 yr by Cap'n Blackmoor
December 15, 200816 yr Author The idea is that the boat is the same, and some pieces stay the same. I don't want the boat to change to massively, I want them to all be connected! Thanks again for the feedback, you seem to be the only one commenting!
December 15, 200816 yr hehe that's quite nice! can't wait to see the next age ! futuristic pirates ? ^^post apoc ? cyberpunk ? ^^ internet pirates ? XD
December 17, 200816 yr Author Age IV: Retro-Future (This is the only part I'm really happy with) -Zeph Edited December 17, 200816 yr by Zepher
December 17, 200816 yr Another age, it looks great, especially "the piece you are happy with" looks very special thanks to the transparent rods. The boat looks funny as well and you can see it's still that old classic dinghy. A textballoon would say: "Hello again, you won't get rid of us for ages!" The first second I saw the boat I thought they were selling hotdogs. But a better look shows it's a boat. Defenitely a boat, although I hope I will have a comfortable ship in the future because there's almost no space for the guys. Great job again! Is another age on his way or is this the end?
December 18, 200816 yr Author One more, but it may be up tomorrow. It's late at night, and I've had a very busy day...
December 18, 200816 yr Author thanks again. the last age should be up late tonight, I'm about half-way through with it.
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