jifel Posted March 13, 2009 Posted March 13, 2009 JD swooped through the traffic on a speeder, following the directions on his sat-nav. Oky remained as close as he could to JD, but far enough away that he wouldn't notice. Once or twice Oky had nearly lost him. JD landed on a platform on the side of a skyscraper. He dismounted the bike and for a moment stared at the buillding in front of him. Then he stepped forward through the door. Oky landed on the other side of the building at thought This cannot be where Skywalker is. What is he doing? Oky crept inside and hid behind a plantpot as JD walked past into an elevator. Oky saw the button he pressed before the doors shut and went into the other elevator, next to the one JD went in. Oky pushed the button saying '1154th Floor'. The elevator rose up the side of the building. He could see the Jedi Temple from the window. The lift reached its destination. The doors opened and Oky saw JD walk round the corner. He followed and peered round, seeing JD draw a pistol and type in a code on the door. Wait! What if it is Skywalker's apartment? It would explain the pistol. I must stop JD! The apartment door opened and JD walked in. Oky crawled to the opened doors. He counted One...two...three! He ran inside and kicked the pistol from JD's hand. JD turned instictively and round house kicked Oky in the face. Oky stumbled back and charged at JD. "Oky?! What are--" Oky slammed into JD's chest and they fell on the floor next to each other, face down. "JD?" said an unfamiliar voice. JD looked up at gasped. Oky looked up and there stood a woman with black long hair and blue eyes with a smile on her face. Just as JD walked slowly toward her and they embraced, it hit Oky. This was Jaina! Hey, JD, just saying, it doesnt make sense for you to be fighting someone who you think you know, then just get up and give Jaina a hug without even saying anything to Oky. Just seems a litle unrealistic. jifel
simonjedi Posted March 13, 2009 Posted March 13, 2009 Its fine, Oky thinks he's going to kill Anakin so he attacks JD to stop him, it turns out it wasn't. Jania is shocked to see someone tackle her boyfriend, so JD comforts her, at least how i see it. Just seems a litle unrealistic. You do realise this is star wars right?
Oky Posted March 13, 2009 Posted March 13, 2009 Its fine, Oky thinks he's going to kill Anakin so he attacks JD to stop him, it turns out it wasn't. Jania is shocked to see someone tackle her boyfriend, so JD comforts her, at least how i see it. Yeah. Also, JD apparently missed her very much (which is why he went to see her), so he probably forgot everything that was going on and wanted to make out with her right away.
jifel Posted March 14, 2009 Posted March 14, 2009 Its fine, Oky thinks he's going to kill Anakin so he attacks JD to stop him, it turns out it wasn't. Jania is shocked to see someone tackle her boyfriend, so JD comforts her, at least how i see it. You do realise this is star wars right? Yeah. Also, JD apparently missed her very much (which is why he went to see her), so he probably forgot everything that was going on and wanted to make out with her right away. But he was only gone a week... Or not... (Time machine is confusing) I know this is SW, I simply think that anyone would ask what the heck is wrong with Oky, unless he and Jaina have been gone for a REALLY long time. Not like i care, this stuff is just for fun. jifel
Adam Posted March 14, 2009 Posted March 14, 2009 (edited) You do realise this is star wars right? This is the All My Children Comic Game. What the heck are you talking about? Edited March 14, 2009 by Adam
Oky Posted March 14, 2009 Posted March 14, 2009 (edited) But he was only gone a week... Or not... (Time machine is confusing)I know this is SW, I simply think that anyone would ask what the heck is wrong with Oky, unless he and Jaina have been gone for a REALLY long time. Nothing is wrong with me. If you haven't noticed, JD is from the future - a future where Jaina is dead. He hasn't seen her for decades, which is why he forgot all about our fight when he saw her. The problem is that Jaina only knows the present JD, who is off fighting in the CW somewhere, presumably on Felucia. Get it? This is the All My Children Comic Game. Well, with all the drama going on lately, that actually makes sense. Edited March 14, 2009 by Oky Wan Kenobi
jifel Posted March 14, 2009 Posted March 14, 2009 Oh, I understand, i simply had to reread some stuff, and make sure i got all the facts down. BTW, i will probably be temporarily called out of the ARC training for a simple, behind friendly lines mission (yah, we all know how those turn out) and i have prepared myself in ARC armour, plus an ATTE and 4 Arc's for the occasion. And I have a captain Rex, but i dont know how I will bring him in without making his involve Anakin anymore than it has. jifel
Wouwie Posted March 15, 2009 Posted March 15, 2009 Oky, can you change the plan a little? So I can go to my own Venator; the Homeland? Re-asking this question...
Oky Posted March 16, 2009 Posted March 16, 2009 Oky, can you change the plan a little? So I can go to my own Venator; the Homeland? I don't get it. What do you want me to do? As long as the holocron replica isn't done yet, everyone can do what they want, basically. Also, why do you want to go to your own Venator?
JimBee Posted March 18, 2009 Author Posted March 18, 2009 Just to clarify, every member is going to their own Venator. Whoever wants to pilot the Fortitude can. Or, we can all go on the Fortitude, it's up to everyone to decide... And Tim Bit? Could you change your post, please? Many characters aren't even ready to go, let alone in Venators. Just hold off on planet jumping for now, there will plenty of time for that very soon...
Tim Bit Posted March 18, 2009 Posted March 18, 2009 It's changed! Hope its okay now, just tell me if it isn't.
pr0visorak Posted March 20, 2009 Posted March 20, 2009 (edited) This is the list of ships that have been assigned, those ships that do not have names you can make up yourselves By the way please Pm me the names so that I can edit the list! Thank you Venators pr0-Salvation Jim-Fortitude Oky-Resurrection Dannik-? Bob-Ghosts Thok-Cole protocol Wouwie-First strike Acclamator TeeBee-Visionary(Assist Salvation) Adam-(Assist Fortitude) Jifel-(Assist Salvation) Garviel-(Assist Resurrection) JD-(Assist Cole protocol) 8p4c-(Assist first strike) Edited March 20, 2009 by pr0visorak
Bob Posted March 20, 2009 Posted March 20, 2009 I thought I was in a Venator... That's what my post says, however if you want me to change it to me being in a Acclamator, I will.
jifel Posted March 20, 2009 Posted March 20, 2009 This is the list of ships that have been assigned, those ships that do not have names you can make up yourselves By the way please Pm me the names so that I can edit the list! Thank you Venators pr0-Salvation Jim-Fortitude Oky-Resurrection Dannik-? JD-Ghosts Thok-Cole protocol Wouwie-First strike Acclamator TeeBee-Visionary(Assist Salvation) Adam-(Assist Fortitude) Jifel-(Assist Salvation) Garviel-(Assist Resurrection) Bob-(Assist Cole protocol) 8p4c-(Assist first strike) Whoa, whoa. I am not in a Venator. I am taking a temporary side-plot, pemember? ARC trooper training? Oh ya... jifel
Tim Bit Posted March 20, 2009 Posted March 20, 2009 This is the list of ships that have been assigned, those ships that do not have names you can make up yourselves By the way please Pm me the names so that I can edit the list! Thank you Venators pr0-Salvation Jim-Fortitude Oky-Resurrection Dannik-? JD-Ghosts Thok-Cole protocol Wouwie-First strike Acclamator TeeBee-Visionary(Assist Salvation) Adam-(Assist Fortitude) Jifel-(Assist Salvation) Garviel-(Assist Resurrection) Bob-(Assist Cole protocol) 8p4c-(Assist first strike) Oh and Adams hallucinating in a med bay on Corosaunt. You did get my Acclamator right
pr0visorak Posted March 20, 2009 Posted March 20, 2009 I thought I was in a Venator...That's what my post says, however if you want me to change it to me being in a Acclamator, I will. Changing it now! Whoa, whoa. I am not in a Venator. I am taking a temporary side-plot, pemember? ARC trooper training? Oh ya...jifel Well than when will you be back! I do not have enough people! Are you joining us in this mission or not? Oh and Adams hallucinating in a med bay on Corosaunt.You did get my Acclamator right Of course Anyway he can command a acclamator. I think... Oh well the admiral can take control if Adam cant
Tim Bit Posted March 20, 2009 Posted March 20, 2009 (edited) One of us (I'll check in a minute) is investigating an attack on a Venator in another system. EDIT: It's Garviel! Edited March 20, 2009 by Tim Bit
pr0visorak Posted March 20, 2009 Posted March 20, 2009 One of us (I'll check in a minute) is investigating an attack on a Venator in another system.EDIT: It's Garviel! Why are there so many side plots? Anyway, lets just wait and hope that he returns.
simonjedi Posted March 20, 2009 Posted March 20, 2009 One of us (I'll check in a minute) is investigating an attack on a Venator in another system.EDIT: It's Garviel! I didn't say it was a Venator, but yeh i am. lets just wait and hope that he returns. Will be on my way soon, i'm not that bothered about my own personal ship either, i'll stay on the fortitude.
jifel Posted March 20, 2009 Posted March 20, 2009 Well than when will you be back! I do not have enough people! Are you joining us in this mission or not? Soon, I hope. I will be missing out on a bit, but I will hopefully lead a support mission soon. jifel
pr0visorak Posted March 21, 2009 Posted March 21, 2009 Soon, I hope. I will be missing out on a bit, but I will hopefully lead a support mission soon.jifel Right, now I need to wait for Jim's response as I need to know wether to assign someone else your ship or not.
simonjedi Posted March 25, 2009 Posted March 25, 2009 You've left me behind AGAIN Can you change your post to include me during your rescue attempt. Palpatine actually authorised the arrest, it wasn't a traitor clone. The image flickered to Palpatine "When i heard about the bombing of Trexxon, I was shocked to hear that someone who was once a respected member of the jedi order could do such a thing as he has done, and as much as I regret saying this, the blame could not be fully on his shoulders. It has come to my attention that groups that have been helping the republic, which were not authorised by me were on the planet moments before it was destroyed. I will now pass a bill to ban all groups from being formed, while all active groups will disbar and will be placed under arrest..."
JimBee Posted March 25, 2009 Author Posted March 25, 2009 Ugh, sorry about that, but the story is way too slow right now. It doesn't make any sense for Palpatine to stop us from going anywhere since the Jedi Council gave permission, and supposedly they have to get the ok from him. I don't want to be a dictator here, but can we just scrap this whole thing and get on with the story? So far, season 2 has gone way off track. And I think we'd better slow down on the story-talk. Shouldn't we just play it out, and not discuss it here? And not make posts that will set the game off-track?
-JD- Posted March 26, 2009 Posted March 26, 2009 You heard the man! Make the story more exciting! Will do Jim. Do you guys mind if I break up the Fortitude I made? I need the pieces. Hopefully the pictures I provided before are enough. Anyway, Oky is making a mini version so all should be alright. I will wait for you to respond. Greetings, JD
Oky Posted March 26, 2009 Posted March 26, 2009 Do you guys mind if I break up the Fortitude I made? I need the pieces. Hopefully the pictures I provided before are enough. Wait! You haven't shown us the updated version yet! Make some pictures for one of your posts in the game (it could be an old one) and then you can take it apart if you like. Anyway, Oky is making a mini version so all should be alright. Oh yeah, I almost forgot about that. Once we see your updates, I can update my Mini Fortitude accordingly and post some pics of it. And btw, I agree with Jim. The game is going way too slow and the side plots are starting to get out of hand. It's time to regroup and get this game going again!
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