Luke McAwesome Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 That's embarassing. I fixed it, Eskallon. I could have sworn you'd introduced yourself earlier. Meanwhile, at the boat, Melody was tinkering with her Detectix Body Radiataion Detector. Concentrating on fixing up the batteries. "What's that?" She jumped, half frightened, half angry that someone interrupted her from her work. It was John. "It's a Detectix Body Radiataion Detector. The batteries are dying, so I'm using an old trick to recharge them." "How do you do that?" "Trade secret," she winked. Everyone was waking up. Adam came running out of the forest, and yelled: "They're not there! They're gone!" "What?!" Melody screamed. She dove off the boat and landed in the shallow water, the rest of the group did the same. She stormed over to the forest, along with Adam, and Jack, who had preferred to walk across land instead of in the water, to prevent from ruining any robotic parts. "Where were they last when they went to go sleep?" she asked Adam. "Near that tree; see? There's a water bottle. That was the water bottle I gave to Zach to wake you up with," said Adam. "What ever happened to sticking together?" Jack said to nobody in particular. "They wouldn't have just left without us. Zach wants to help survivors, not abandon them," said Adam.
simonjedi Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 (edited) Just before the group set off, Garviel's comlink blipped. "Garviel here" he answered "Alpha 45 what's the matter?" "We've just got the results from that body we picked up. You're not going to believe who it is" 2 years ago "In other news, tensions between the US and canada are at an all time high, the president of the US will be travelling to Toronto to.." The image of newscaster faded which was replaced with the air hostess. "can all crewmen to board the grey dwarf report to docking room 3" she faded from the screen to be replaced by the "robobudy" ad. Garviel Loken looked up from his book, and went to grab his suitcase. He checked in and was about to board the shuttle then he heard something from behind him. He turned around "You've taken my suitcase" the female said. Indeed he had. They swapped suitcases and sat next to each other as the shuttle sped towards the orbiting grey dwarf. "I'm Catherine by the way" Catherine said. "I'm Garviel" Garviel replied and she smiled and Garviel smiled back. Edited September 2, 2009 by simonjedi
Luke McAwesome Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 While they were walking through the forest searching, the group was chattering amongst themselves. "Where do you think they went?" "Do you think they're dead?" "You think it was the aliens? Or maybe the phantoms?" Were all common questions. Melody couldn't stand this anymore. Splitting up was one move a group should never do. Especially in an apocalyptic setting. Suddenly, Melody stopped. As did Jack. They smelled smoke. "Oh no... No, no, no, no!" Melody's voice started getting louder with every "No". She ran into the trees, the rest of the group following. Fire. Everywhere. It was from her car. Birds, flying everywhere in the skies, rabbit scampering around, a few animals laying dead, burning on the groun- Suddenly, a ear-shattering cracking sound came from a tree. It was tipping forward. And it was on fire. The tree tipped towards the group, they all started running in various directions. The tree crashed to the ground, sending Adam, Melody, and Chris flying four feet into the air, arms and legs flailing. Each one of them thunked on to the ground; then, they noticed that the ground one foot before them was burning quickly. A loud explosion blew two trees right out of the ground. Her car had exploded! One of the trees landed right in front of Jack and Robert, missing them by about three feet. "Holy megablocks!" they both yelled at their near-death experience. "Everyone! Regroup at the boat!" Adam yelled. The group started dodging flames, and finally arrived at the boat. "That... was crazy!" John said. "I'm sorry, I, I forgot about the car... I should've put out the fire in the engine; I didn't expect to make a wildfire!" Melody tol them all. "Well, you did. And because of you, we all almost got killed! What else could go wrong today?" Jack said.
Eskallon Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 (edited) "What the heck is that red and orange light in the distance" said Eskallon "THAT IS A FIRE" screamed Sam "Lets get to the river right now" shouted Bob They all ran off in one direction "Hey wait we can go right and still get there, plus the fire is coming the way you are running" announced Eskallon "Ok lets get going" said Sam "How could this have happened" shouted Sam as he ran "Lets think later and run right now" said Eskallon "Hey look it is the boat" shouted Bob "Lets board this ship" said Eskallon "We can at least move further down the river" said Sam They got on the boat just in time before getting killed Edited September 2, 2009 by Eskallon
simonjedi Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 (edited) SimonJedi I have no idea what body you mean or what you meant by that story so please continue with what you are doing but please explain in this topic or the discussion topic. way back on page 13, we discovered a dead body. I got it sent to the lab to get it analyse. I got the test results in my post and began a flashback. All flashbacks will be in italics. I'd like to see everyone else's pre- during- and post- flashbacks as well. Edited September 2, 2009 by simonjedi
Luke McAwesome Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 (edited) SimonJedi I have no idea what body you mean or what you meant by that story so please continue with what you are doing but please explain in this topic or the discussion topic. way back on page 13, we discovered a dead body. I got it sent to the lab to get it analyse. I got the test results in my post and began a flashback. That's right. I'm guessing it's that girl? Edited September 2, 2009 by Striker
Eskallon Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 (edited) Hi Please disregard my most previous post as me and Striker were obviously posting at the same time but he beat me to it. Edit: Read that post I edited it Edited September 2, 2009 by Eskallon
simonjedi Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 (edited) way back on page 13, we discovered a dead body. I got it sent to the lab to get it analyse. I got the test results in my post and began a flashback. That's right. I'm guessing it's that girl? Maybe ;) Yes Edited September 2, 2009 by simonjedi
Zapper Brick Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 "You guys ok? said Mel as she met them on the deck "Yeah, I think so....." said Zach. "Who's this guy? asked Melody, pointing at Esk. "We'll talk about him later." said Zach, still exausted from the run. Later, safley in the room.... "This is Eskallon." said Bob. "Hello, do you like to rip alien guts? asked Mel. Esk simply stared back at her. "Ok guys, whats the plan?" asked Sam.
Eskallon Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 "Well first let Eskallon say something about himself" said Bob "Everyone Eskallon will help us in the fight for peace" said Zach "Ok but what is your story Eskallon?" Said Marcus "While as a general in the army me and my team uncovered a strange body and soon we were blindfolded and taken to a prison to be locked up. All members of my team were in section 372 . We escaped together but when I went to search for food with two others they were killed. We three came back to find our friends dead in a huge pile. All with a single bullet in their heads. I then went off on my own and found a base here in woods when the war started. I returned to the prison only to find it a surrounded by robots. Since then I swore to myself I would try to stop robots, aliens and phantoms from taking over Earth or just destroying it. "Now for the plan" said Sam "Ok listen up everyone(tells them about the river getting thin, the mine and the city in the forest) so I think we should cut through the mine" said Eskallon "I think we should take the mine route to the city too" said Jack "Wait a minute, first Eskallon and Melody you need to know about things. (Tells them about the core, them being robots and why they need to shut down the rest of the cores so the others can not recharge)" said Zach
Zapper Brick Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 "I have an idea!" said Sam. "My sub might be able to get through the small area, then I can take out the alien base which created this forrest. "CC, you got any grenades?" "Yeah, here." Ok, good, that'll do it. Zach, you and Jack go and take out the mountain base, take some grenades, they'll work."
Luke McAwesome Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 (edited) Sorry, everyone, if I keep revolving around my character. I just have a bunch of ideas. "A mine, huh? I'm in. Tell me where to go, when you figure it out," she said as she went up the deck to get back to the cab. She couldn't see very far past the front. Which made it difficult to drive. She considered stopping for the night but that put them at risk of losing somebody, or them getting killed. She put on a pair of Detectix Night Vision Goggles that she found in a crate behind the engine. She looked farther, about twenty feet past the front. The river seemed to stop. "Now, how's that possible?" She asked herself. She waited a second before it finally hit her. It was a waterfall. She ran down to the deck and opened the hatch. "Eh... Eskallon... I don't think the river's going to be too thin for a while... There's a waterfall!" "WHAT?!" They all stumbled up to the top deck and through the fog they saw that the iver ended. In midair. "No! No! No!" Zach yelled as he ran to the back of the boat. "Everybody get back here and look for a small landmass!" They all ran to the back of the boat, and started looking out for a large rock, or a hand-hold of some sort. There was no stopping the boat. They might be doomed. "Does anyone know how to make a lasso?!" Zach asked the crowd. Melody ran to the bottom deck, grabbed a rope, and ran back up. "I've only done this twice before, so here goes nothing!" She said. She lasso'd it around a boulder. It made it! "Quick! Zach! Grab on! Everybody grab on!" Zach grabbed the front of the rope, Melody behind him, Chris behind her, and the rest of the group behind Chris. Suddenly, the group felt their guts rise to the heads. "AHHHHH!!!" Shrill cries flew through the air. They're feet left the boat, and they tumbled through the air like rag dolls. The boat feel down at least thirty stories and collided with a bunch of sharp rocks at the bottom. An explosion rang out. Nobody dared to look down. "AAAHHHHH!!!!!" Melody, not sure if the rope could hold this much wait, screamed at the top of her lungs over the sound of rushing water: "Start climbing!" The group, using all their strength, started climbing up the rope. Suddenly, a jump sent them waving through the air again; the rope couldn't hold on much longer. Zach was at the top of the waterfall, and found some rocks to grab on to. He stood up, but he had to keep one hand on the rock. The rest of the group did the same. Jack was the only one left to get up, he was slowly making his way up. "Jack! You've got to hurry!" Melody yelled down at him. She held her hand down over the falls to grab him when he got there. Only a few more feet now... "AAAHHH!!!" Melody slipped over some mud and Zach grabbed her hand. Zach couldn't support her, and fell with her, but they grabbed on to the rope. Oh, this is bad. Zach thought. The three held on for dear life. Five seconds earlier Chris watched as Melody held her hand down to help Jack up. "AAAHHH!!!" SHe had slipped on mud. He watched in horror as Zach grabbed her hand and fell down, too. "Oh no!" He yelled. The group moved forward to go help their friends. Their hands slippery with mud, the three couldn't hold on any longer. But they noticed the rope moving. "Pull!" Garviel yelled as they moved in rhythm to pull the trio up. They finally made it up the falls, and staggered back to the riverside, and got up on the beach. Everyone was soaking wet, and shivering. "Thanks," said Melody. "No... Problem..." Zach said, out of breath. His hands were bleeding, as were Melody's, and Jack's one hand. The rope had cut their hands up. "Well, genius, what now?" Chris asked. "We have no transportation. We have no food. And, we almost died. We're going to have to walk, I guess," said Melody. "What do you think, Zach?" Thunder boomed in the sky above them. Edited September 2, 2009 by Striker
Eskallon Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 "Wait , you can't just go start a battle" said Eskallon "And why not" replied Garviel "I know this place more than any of you, and I know that if you go walking into the alien base you might be ok but the mountain city, no way." said Eskallon "Tell us why not Eskallon" said Jack "Because the nano bots will rip you up or if not the newer robots as you call second generation ones will blast your head off. Your only chance is some of us go to the alien base and the rest all go to the old mine." said Eskallon "Ok fine maybe you are right" said Sam "I would say CC, Sam, Garviel, Jack, Marcus and Adam take out the alien base, while Me, Melody, Zach, Robert and John take out the mountain base/city." announced Eskallon "OK I agree but we will need a form of communication if we are to split up and we will need a meeting point at the end of it all"
Luke McAwesome Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 (edited) Whoops! Sorry, I keep posting before you, Eskallon. Do you want me to edit my last post? "What about radios?" Melody asked. "Do we have any radios?" "No. Remember, your boat went over the waterfall," Chris said, rolling his eyes. "It's not my fault. Blame nature!" She told him. "So, what's this about nanobots?" Melody asked Eskallon. Edited September 2, 2009 by Striker
Eskallon Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 Thanks Striker, it dosn't follow on but who cares. Lets get on with the story. "These nanobots are tiny things. They hide on the ground then chop your feet off while you are walking, after this they will start cutting you up piece by piece!!!. They are also known as robot guardians as they are only found around the robot factories." said Eskallon "Ouch, but how do you know?" said Melody "Once I went towards the city with a friend but they cut him up. I ran for my life and made it out of there alive!" replied Eskallon "Ok well then the mine is certainly the best option" said Zach "Lets get back to your base for the rest of today and then tomorrow we can split up." said Bob "Yes that is a pretty good idea and I think their may be some radios in my basement, which is full of random junk" said Eskallon "Lets head out but which way is it exactly?" asked Marcus "Oh yes, sorry I forgot, follow me" replied Eskallon "He really does know this area well" John whispered to Chris
Zapper Brick Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 "Come on team, let's take the grenades and seak in to the alien base while we have the chance." said Sam. "Alright, good luck you guys, meet in the mine right?" replied Esk. 'Yup, the mine." said Sam as the group spilt.
Luke McAwesome Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 "Good luck everyone, and just remember, try not to die," said Zach. "So, Eskallon, which way are we heading?" Melody asked.
Zapper Brick Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 "Wait!" said Sam, turning to face the other group. "I have an idea, we might be able to reach the Robot Base! "All I need is a large cloth and a flamethrower, or some gasoline and a non-flammable toob.
Eskallon Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 (edited) "Sam, where the hell are we meant to get tat lot of stuff." said Zach "Lets stick to the original plan" said Marcus "I know what ever you are thinking is wrong, remember they will just cut off your feet before you can think" said Eskallon "Maybe but what were you gonna do in the first place Sam?" asked Melody Edited September 2, 2009 by Eskallon
Zapper Brick Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 "Simple" said Sam. "We use those items, plus some sort of basket, and make a makeshift hot air baloon, we'll go right over the probes."
Eskallon Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 "Hmm maybe that could work, but still with the problem of where to get those items." said Jack "Why don't we all stick together instead, we could blow up the alien base and then move back my base and see what we can actully do?" asked Eskallon Zach replied "Yeah that sounds good, have you got any food though?" "Enough for us to all have a decent meal for one night." said Eskallon "That area may have been damaged by the fire though making it vulnerable to attack" said CC "You really thought I wouldn't have spent time making a shield, well I did so we will be safe." "Ok well lets head to the alien base then." said Sam "They all hurried along the forest lead by Eskallon
Zapper Brick Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 (edited) "Wish we had some transportation.....' said Sam "I'll have to think of an idea.... Dosen't anyone here have a flamethrower? "Wait.....the remains of Melody's boat! Maybe we can salvage something there, we could maybe get some materials for the balloon, or make some sort of ground vechile." Edited September 2, 2009 by Zapper Brick
Eskallon Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 "Listen Sam, we can't get to the boat I miss it too. If you want we could try getting to it in the morning but for now we have a job to do." said Melody "I agree, lets go" They carried on walking and chatting as they went "Their could be a transport at the base" Zach said "Maybe, it is likely" said Eskallon "Lets hope" said CC and Bob
Zapper Brick Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 "Ok, stay close, and stay hidden, we don't wanna get lost or found by aliens" said Sam "I wish we could get some alien suits.... then we could get to the heart of the building without a fight."
-JD- Posted September 2, 2009 Author Posted September 2, 2009 (edited) You all seem to be forgetting about my, Adam's and Robert's powers. "Righty, I'll go first." said Adam "I was charged last, and should be strong enough to stand those nanobots." He was right. Suddenly a sharp blade swooped accross the ground, but shattered on contact with Adam's leg. He turned and smiled. "Okay....Zach, Robert, why don't you go up there too?" said JAck "I suppose we could." said Zach, secretly looking forward to the metal blade not being able to hurt him. "Meanwhile Jack, you tell Melody about what has happened so far." "My pleasure." he replied Dang it Zapper! I started before you! Who should edit? I ain't posted in a while so... Edited September 2, 2009 by Jammiedodger714
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