I have an idea it's a bit sketchy, but i will fill it out in time.

It basically follows Mata Nui's journey off Bara Magna and his incounters.

Chapter one :

The Glatorian and Agori, after defeating the Skrall, build a craft for Mata Nui to leave the planet on. Farewells are said, and Mata Nui departs from his new friends.

Traveling through space, his craft encounters some trouble ( what the trouble is is to be confirmed ), and violently crash lands on a near by planet.

Among the wreakage, a small expeditionary party ( element : air ), discover the desimated body of Mata Nui, torn apart in the crash.

The tribe rebuild him. ( Haha, see how I did it, it means he is the same character, but with a new design. )

The new species are a highly advanced race, divided into 6, beautiful cities, here's the catch, they are all at war.

The tribes:

Air: Striving for peace, their new discovery might be the key to world unity.

Fire: The tribe that started the war, they are a cruel race of blood thirsty cannabels, who don't care for anyone, or anything.

Stone: A very powerful tribe, they are warlike beings, towering over others, and decimating their oponents with ease.

Water: A race of intellegent amphibians, they are not troubled by the war, but will fight when threatened with unflinching courage.

Earth: A cowardly tribe, hiding in the shadows, but, the are highly advanced in weaponry, and when out of running space, will unleash their fury open their opponents.

Ice: A cold hearted race, they show no mercy on their enemy, and their fighting technics are precise, and devastating.

How it all started:

In the begining, there was a magical being, powerful enough to contend with Mata Nui. He created a world, with a highly technological society of super beings. He gave them a limited source of magical stones, to be used as power, for their growing empires. But the fire tribe was too greedy, the harvested the rocks, until there was next to nothing leaft. The other tribes to action, they raided the fire tribes city, entering through the mighty walls separating the cities. What they found was a decaying city, rotten corpses hanging from the windows. The party went further in, they were ambushed, by a new race of mad beasts, blood dripping from their bodies, the fire tribe had been sent mad by the awesome power of the rocks. The party was devoured.

The magical being turned away in shame, horrified by the chaos.

The rest of the tribes fell into panick, the fire beasts were loose and their God had abandoned them. In the confusion many members of each tribes were wiped out. The remaining suply of rocks was destroyed in a epic battle in the giant cortyard between the cities.

Now, in a age of stife, each tribe struggling to get enough resourches to last a week, and so raids started on eachother, each tribe attacking at night and stealing the stones.

In this stale mate, Mata Nui might be the only chance of survival for this dieing race.....

A quick description of the planet.

This world is divided into 7 sections, one equally sized portion for each tribe, with a massive courtyards inbetween each city, filled with the corpes of dead comrades.

So what do you think? It's a bit sketchy in parts, but still, I think I might try and fill it out to make a little seris.

There might be some spelling issues, it took me ages, but my computer keys are old, and don't always respond.

Okay, I know i didn't follow the main idea already in this topic, but I really wanted to share my idea with you guys, and i needed to get it into writing.

P.S: Hey, is anybody willing to design the cannabels for me? I would like to try and build them, but my model is a bit scrappy, I am hoping someone could fill me out with some prototype drawings for me to create.

Edited August 10, 200915 yr by The crazy one

The last thing we need is more planet-hopping. Especially after only one year on Bara Magna.

Edited August 10, 200915 yr by Bfahome

I have an idea it's a bit sketchy, but i will fill it out in time.

It basically follows Mata Nui's journey off Bara Magna and his incounters.

Chapter one :

The Glatorian and Agori, after defeating the Skrall, build a craft for Mata Nui to leave the planet on. Farewells are said, and Mata Nui departs from his new friends.

Traveling through space, his craft encounters some trouble ( what the trouble is is to be confirmed ), and violently crash lands on a near by planet.

Among the wreakage, a small expeditionary party ( element : air ), discover the desimated body of Mata Nui, torn apart in the crash.

The tribe rebuild him. ( Haha, see how I did it, it means he is the same character, but with a new design. )

The new species are a highly advanced race, divided into 6, beautiful cities, here's the catch, they are all at war.

The tribes:

Air: Striving for peace, their new discovery might be the key to world unity.

Fire: The tribe that started the war, they are a cruel race of blood thirsty cannabels, who don't care for anyone, or anything.

Stone: A very powerful tribe, they are warlike beings, towering over others, and decimating their oponents with ease.

Water: A race of intellegent amphibians, they are not troubled by the war, but will fight when threatened with unflinching courage.

Earth: A cowardly tribe, hiding in the shadows, but, the are highly advanced in weaponry, and when out of running space, will unleash their fury open their opponents.

Ice: A cold hearted race, they show no mercy on their enemy, and their fighting technics are precise, and devastating.

How it all started:

In the begining, there was a magical being, powerful enough to contend with Mata Nui. He created a world, with a highly technological society of super beings. He gave them a limited source of magical stones, to be used as power, for their growing empires. But the fire tribe was too greedy, the harvested the rocks, until there was next to nothing leaft. The other tribes to action, they raided the fire tribes city, entering through the mighty walls separating the cities. What they found was a decaying city, rotten corpses hanging from the windows. The party went further in, they were ambushed, by a new race of mad beasts, blood dripping from their bodies, the fire tribe had been sent mad by the awesome power of the rocks. The party was devoured.

The magical being turned away in shame, horrified by the chaos.

The rest of the tribes fell into panick, the fire beasts were loose and their God had abandoned them. In the confusion many members of each tribes were wiped out. The remaining suply of rocks was destroyed in a epic battle in the giant cortyard between the cities.

Now, in a age of stife, each tribe struggling to get enough resourches to last a week, and so raids started on eachother, each tribe attacking at night and stealing the stones.

In this stale mate, Mata Nui might be the only chance of survival for this dieing race.....

A quick description of the planet.

This world is divided into 7 sections, one equally sized portion for each tribe, with a massive courtyards inbetween each city, filled with the corpes of dead comrades.

So what do you think? It's a bit sketchy in parts, but still, I think I might try and fill it out to make a little seris.

There might be some spelling issues, it took me ages, but my computer keys are old, and don't always respond.

Okay, I know i didn't follow the main idea already in this topic, but I really wanted to share my idea with you guys, and i needed to get it into writing.

P.S: Hey, is anybody willing to design the cannabels for me? I would like to try and build them, but my model is a bit scrappy, I am hoping someone could fill me out with some prototype drawings for me to create.

the Storyline there is even better than Starcraft

I agree with BFA. WE need to stay on Bara Magna for a good couple of years- or at least around it's vicinity. It has plenty of potential.

The last thing we need is more planet-hopping. Especially after only one year on Bara Magna.

Fair point, but it was meerly a suggestion.

Edited August 10, 200915 yr by The crazy one

Fair point, but it was meerly a suggestion.

ACTUALLY- I think we should use your story as a 2011 story. Maybe after we finish our 2010 collab, we can do 2011-even if 2010 hasn't even started. Your story idea is just too good to pass up. LOTS of potential, and only one returning set.

ACTUALLY- I think we should use your story as a 2011 story. Maybe after we finish our 2010 collab, we can do 2011-even if 2010 hasn't even started. Your story idea is just too good to pass up. LOTS of potential, and only one returning set.

Thank you, wait a few more months for the next topic though.

Edited August 10, 200915 yr by The crazy one

Thank you, wait a few more months for the next topic though.

Actually, Antrozek had an idea that I really like. He suggests that perhaps your story begins as the summer of 2010 and goes into the beginning of 2011( in our collab-universe)

Actually, Antrozek had an idea that I really like. He suggests that perhaps your story begins as the summer of 2010 and goes into the beginning of 2011( in our collab-universe)

Sounds intersting, looking foward to more info.

Actually, Antrozek had an idea that I really like. He suggests that perhaps your story begins as the summer of 2010 and goes into the beginning of 2011( in our collab-universe)

I don't really like that idea. We should have at least a year of the current plan. Then we can move on to this new idea in 2011. At the end of 2011, we can add the part about the giant robot death match, saving the Bara Magna residents, and the un-shattering.

Well let's finish what we have on the board right now, if we'll ever finish it. >.>

We can continue Crazy One's Idea later, lets' get Mata Nui in his body first.

And I'm still looking for bios from people, I'm planniong on at least starting to write the story or an outline. =/

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I'm hoping to make a sketch or two of some possible canister villains - any suggestions/requests as to their weaponry/appearance?

-Nuju Metru

I'm hoping to make a sketch or two of some possible canister villains - any suggestions/requests as to their weaponry/appearance?

-Nuju Metru

I presume you've seen Vertea's Yellow/Purple creature drawing, either on here or on BZP? Pretty much that, only with a different demonic creature base, and other cool colours for the other villains.

I presume you've seen Vertea's Yellow/Purple creature drawing, either on here or on BZP? Pretty much that, only with a different demonic creature base, and other cool colours for the other villains.

I think so... nonetheless, mind giving me a link, just so I'm sure? Thanks. :)

-Nuju

I think so... nonetheless, mind giving me a link, just so I'm sure? Thanks. :)

-Nuju

Link.

Link.

So, like, if that one is a bat, or whatever, I should make one based off of some other creature? I can do that. :)

-Nuju

EDIT: Seems that I couldn't, actually. I didn't have any ideas. :/

However, I did end up just developing a head, if anyone can find a use for it.

Edited August 11, 200915 yr by Nuju Metru

However, I did end up just developing a head, if anyone can find a use for it.[/b]

Looks like a cross between a Crast and a Jutlin.

~Bunda

Looks like a cross between a Crast and a Jutlin.

~Bunda

Yeah, I know.

Hey, I was uninspired, ok? :P

-Nuju Metru

Head's very nice, and the color seems to fit.

And it does look insecty and like an Antroz/Krika mash-up like Bunda stated.

Maybe add a hunched, clawed and winged figure?

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will this guy work in some how?? C:\Users\Evonne\Pictures\legos\bionicles 8-08\IMG_1961.JPG

will this guy work in some how?? C:\Users\Evonne\Pictures\legos\bionicles 8-08\IMG_1961.JPG

A picture on the internet would be more useful. Try uploading it to Brickshelf or Flickr so that we can all see it.

HAY all the bad guys should have their own color blending to yellow that would be frikkin awesome

HAY all the bad guys should have their own color blending to yellow that would be frikkin awesome

And painful to the eyes, especially if there's a group shot of them.

Hey, guys! would y'all mind If I call dibs on either the Ice or Jungle/Swamp Villain?

Hey, guys! would y'all mind If I call dibs on either the Ice or Jungle/Swamp Villain?

No prob, as long as I get the other one. :P

-Nuju