Abandoned Imperial outpost

[Vladimir Leonov]

92a

This is another small MOC I put together just now, it is a small Imperial Outpost that had been abandoned, but is now covertly used by pirates from which to launch raids.

[hurdy-gurdy pirate]

Simple but efficient! Some of your bricks look old, but it adds a lot to the "ruins" effect.

[Big Cam]

I was going to literally say the same thing. Simple but hey, that's all forts used to be was simple towers.

I like the fact that it opens up, it really expands the playability.

old bricks are still bricks, and for something like this they add to the abandoned feel.

A+

[Admiral Croissant]

Looks good But still a bit empty, maybe you could also put some weapons, plants, flags and other stuff in it to give it a more 'living' look.

But especially your windows look good and I also like the plain white colour

[Captain Genaro]

I like the way that you captured the abandond feel but I can't help but thinking that there needs to be a ladder from the dock into the outpost. How else will they get the hard earned treasure up there?

[Ratshot]

This is great. You did a great job on making it look deserted.

I have two possible improvement ideas.

1. Take that brick with the big pirate skull and put it in the wall.

2. Add a crane to the tower. That way the pirates could load up the treasure.

3. Add stairs to the dock. There's no real way to get into the fort, other than to climb.