Cart stop

[MetroiD]

Nice final touches! You've perfected the cobblestone path which was quite crucial to this MOC.

I must admit however that I still miss a true "catch" in this storyline here. As I've said before, I couldn't quite get the idea just from looking at the pics themselves - and even after reading the story and finding out what this MOC is all about, I still think it needs more salt and pepper. Don't get me wrong, it is a great little scene, but I believe that it does need an interesting story being added to and developed in it. As it is now, both characters' backstories have absolutely nothing in common and the cart stop is just... "there". It does not provide a pivotal point in the young soldier's journey towards (officially) capturing the heart of the daughter, nor is it something of huge significance to the old hermit either...

So to me, getting that right and creating a matching storyline is precisely what could turn this lovely scene into a winning entry.

[Zorro]

Just to say I blogged this nice entry on Classic-Pirates.com. Watch out for it tomorrow or the day after.

Much fun and luck with the contest!

[RampantDingo]

Thanks for that Zorro. I'm going to try get in one or two more pictures without the people in it.