Betrayel

[RepublicForces]

!WIP WIP WIP WIP WIP WIP!

Hello EB here is my newest diorama.

Not really my best, but please be nice .

Anyway here is it.

(If need more pics I will provide them in other posts.)

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Edited March 16, 2010 by RepublicForces

[Oky]

No offense, but that's not much of a diorama. Just some elevated plates on a baseplate with the Endor bunker and RGS next to it. The fact that you provide no story and only one pic doesn't help it either. Perhaps you could expand on the first post a bit?

[Rufus]

Looks nice; I like the greenery and the platform, but I can't really see what's going on. How about some close-ups of the action?

[Brickus]

I don't really understand what is going on, could you provide more pics.

[sok117]

Maybe you should try adding some more "home-made" creations to your work, instead of just throwing a bunch of sets onto a couple of plates. It's like the creations in the Lego magazine that our just official sets, whats up with that?

[Ras 74]

Some story to your scene sure would help out alot. Also some more pictures and overview of what you have done.

If you like this yourself, see it as a work-in-progress and add more things to the scenery. Can really just be details of

different kinds.

Good Luck!

[lightningtiger]

Yeah, I agree with the others - what's the story ?

A little more information please !

I'm a conformist! 'RepublicForces' !

[Palms]

Yeah, it definitely needs a story, but here are a few tips to make it better:

1. Add more pics we can't see a thing.

2. Add more baseplate, the RAG doesn't even fit on the plate.

3. Add more stuff made by you I.E. vehicles buildings scenery.

Edited March 15, 2010 by Palms

[Big Cam]

It looks like it could be cool, but I cant see. From what I can see an imperial is getting shot by a clone??

[Walter Kovacs]

It looks like it could be cool, but I cant see. From what I can see an imperial is getting shot by a clone??

Looks more like a jedi being shot by a clone. Notice the lightsaber flying off near the RGS door? A little backstory should help out a lot.

That might be why there's only one view of the scene, as well. Any other angle and you'll see something holding that lightsaber.

My question is why there's a stormie (unless my eyes are lying to me) up on the platform, when the RGS clearly has phase I clones? Seems a bit random to me.

[RepublicForces]

I was inspired by CoD MW2

when roach and ghost got betrayed by general Sheppard.

Anyway I think I will ad more to it this week. Now it's official an WiP.

Btw that lightsaber needs to be an rocket from an rocket launcher.

And I need some help I can't post anymore pics because I used The Cabg for the servimg to upload my pics but I forgot my password there and now I can't post anymore pics.

Dous anybody knows some program to upload pictures??

@walter

I needed some landingcraft and that is the only one I have.

Edited March 15, 2010 by RepublicForces

[Darth Lion]

Dous anybody knows some program to upload pictures??

Imageshack is a free uploading program used by many members!

Well, not so sure what to say - it needs some improvements but it's still a WIP.

If you add some more detail, it could turn into a really good diorama!

Edited March 15, 2010 by Darth Lion

[RepublicForces]

Hey, thanks darth lion.

Edited March 16, 2010 by RepublicForces