eNiGMa Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 I really pushed myself to get this done before Thursday (I leave for a couple weeks on that day), and I'm glad to finally be done. So, here's Chapter 2 for your enjoyment! http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=187272 Chapters 3 and 4 are already planned out, so I'll get to work on those when I get back. Thanks for reading! Quote
Norro Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 Looking good! Gotta love that hat... God Bless, Nathan Quote
Jipay Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 I need to touch the hat... It's custom isn't it ? Quote
Norro Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 I need to touch the hat... It's custom isn't it ? No, it's available here for only 18 cents: bargain X-D God Bless, Nathan Quote
eNiGMa Posted June 6, 2006 Author Posted June 6, 2006 Thanks for the comments! Yeah, that hat is one of my favorites. It can be used in any theme and still look really cool. Quote
xwingyoda Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 Great Chapter 2 eNiGMa ;-) Loool, I love the "touch that hat, its Danish" X-D Looks like the sailers "ponpon" for luck hehe !! I wish you a good vacations and come back to finish this promissing story asap !! :-D :-P *yoda* Quote
john cleese Posted June 6, 2006 Posted June 6, 2006 This is way better then chapter two and this time the joke was based on the premise of the cartoon. The only thing i thought could have improved it was if the king also made a comment about the hat. maybe something like, "Yes, yes it's a very sexy hat and we all are very jealous of it, but we should focus on the task at hand right now." like proffeser farnsworth from futurama does. In number one vladek and Danju should have been talking about a time they were fighting. One of them could have made a comment about how the other almost killed them like nothing ever hapened. I'll be looking forward to chapter three Quote
eNiGMa Posted June 6, 2006 Author Posted June 6, 2006 The only thing i thought could have improved it was if the king also made a comment about the hat. maybe something like, "Yes, yes it's a very sexy hat and we all are very jealous of it, but we should focus on the task at hand right now." like proffeser farnsworth from futurama does. In number one vladek and Danju should have been talking about a time they were fighting. One of them could have made a comment about how the other almost killed them like nothing ever hapened. Ah yes, good ol' Professor Farnsworth.... Thanks for the tips! I'm actually writing all of these down for possible use in future chapters. :-) Thanks for all the comments! Quote
Athos Posted June 7, 2006 Posted June 7, 2006 Great story. I love the humor, especially the sexy danish hat. Steve Quote
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