This is my first MOC (I hope it's ok... ), it's supposed to be commander fox and 2 clones going out on a jungle patrol with my custom speeder.

Originally I wanted to put in Ashoka and a turbo tank but I thought that all that stuff would make the picture over whelming and you wouldn't really see whats going on.

And...

Sorry for the bad quality

Thanks for viewing, comment if you want!

-DS2626

Edited February 11, 201114 yr by DS2626

Hey, this is really nice for your first MOC! The custom speeder is pretty nifty. However, you'll always want to make it look interesting, and not have too much free "stud space" for a diorama like this. Perhaps you could fit the crocodile onto the base plate itself? Don't be afraid to experiment with different types of structures and landscapes, and play around a little when designing an environment like this. I always like to take a look around Brickshelf before building something to get some inspiration. Keep building always!

Hey, this is really nice for your first MOC! The custom speeder is pretty nifty. However, you'll always want to make it look interesting, and not have too much free "stud space" for a diorama like this. Perhaps you could fit the crocodile onto the base plate itself? Don't be afraid to experiment with different types of structures and landscapes, and play around a little when designing an environment like this. I always like to take a look around Brickshelf before building something to get some inspiration. Keep building always!

Yeah, that about sums it up. Its a good start, but I reckon you can improve on it. Add some more bush shrub-scenerey (so it really looks like they're in the jungle), maybe some enemies attacking?

CF

Edited February 11, 201114 yr by CommanderFox

Great idea guys! I should probably add some droids too it and also lots more bushes and trees(got lot of those from my Indiana jones sets )

And then have a narrow path made brown or tan going through it.

Thanks guys for the Awesome suggestions!