Samurai MOC: March of Death

[Peanuts]

I built this samurai MOC lately, enjoy and comment:

I tried doing a dead tree, I'm not very glad how it turned out...

A Torii gate.

Two surviving ronin, waiting for the left samurai.

Since I don't have a white ninja, I had to hide him between the rocks.

Overall view.

Edited May 21, 2011 by Rufus
Indexed!

[Gregorovich]

Nice . I like the snow and the Torii gate. Well done!

[KimT]

What happened to their legs?

I don't get it - snow or clouds or what?

A little messy and odd to me.

[BrickArtist]

It's really hard to tell what's going on here, try organizing your scene to make it understandable. Wash some of those white plates should help a bit too.

[lightningtiger]

Interesting creation 'Peanuts', but I agree with 'KimT' and "Dobbyclone'....their legs and the seen is a little confusing or is that the purpose ?

Anyway, there is still a few good points, the bloody scenes good and creepy and the Torii gate is well done indeed.

Brick On 'Peanuts'

[Santhor]

I think it's supposed to be really-deep snow, correct? Anyway, this is pretty cool. I like the legs sticking out from the improvised grave.

-Santhor

[henryhotspurs]

I am not sure of the story being portrayed, but the scene is interesting. Some cool parts use but to what end? Is this a dio for a dio's sake or is your intent to tell a story?

Either way I like it.

[Fuzzylegobricks]

I like it and I love the use of the white chair as snow for the body to rest in.

I give this a 7 out of 10.

[Peanuts]

Sorry for not replying so far, I got drifted of.

Nice . I like the snow and the Torii gate. Well done!

Thanks.

What happened to their legs?

I don't get it - snow or clouds or what?

A little messy and odd to me.

Yes, it's supposed to be deep snow. And sorry for the messiness.

It's really hard to tell what's going on here, try organizing your scene to make it understandable. Wash some of those white plates should help a bit too.

Okay.

Interesting creation 'Peanuts', but I agree with 'KimT' and "Dobbyclone'....their legs and the seen is a little confusing or is that the purpose ?

Anyway, there is still a few good points, the bloody scenes good and creepy and the Torii gate is well done indeed.

Brick On 'Peanuts'

Well, it's not intended to be that jumbled, just a bit.

I think it's supposed to be really-deep snow, correct? Anyway, this is pretty cool. I like the legs sticking out from the improvised grave.

-Santhor

Correct.

I am not sure of the story being portrayed, but the scene is interesting. Some cool parts use but to what end? Is this a dio for a dio's sake or is your intent to tell a story?

Either way I like it.

I don't plan to make a sequel to it, but I might very well do further mocs based on feudal Japan.

I like it and I love the use of the white chair as snow for the body to rest in.

I give this a 7 out of 10.

Thanks.