I am not sure if it belongs in this sub-forum.

It is a Sci-fi story that happens about the year 2018 that will be updated.

Here we go!

Best ways to story is start from the end, and then go back to the beginning, than go to the ending again by another perspective, that’s what David Ershon from “The Other Guys” said. However, this is my diary, I not two people. Therefore, I am going to start from the beginning.

I woke up with a headache in Reginald Boarding School; we call it “The Cube” (you might ask, “Why in the heck are you in a boarding school?” I am not going to answer the question, but you can just watch The Fast and the Furious movies to find out.) Anyway, I realized that I was late for the campus bus (the school was almost as big as a town, so a bus is needed). Either I have to clean the bathroom(s) as a punishment, take the shortcut, or I can skate without anyone noticing. I decided to combine option 2 and 3.

Today is Science Day, it is a day where a scientist comes to The Cube and checks out our science projects. This particular day changed my life. Not that I got the Nobel Prize for best invention or something. Our team was making a solar powered generator for a computer. I arrived at class just when the teacher is taking attendances. Mr. Pribre was staring at me, I knew him for three years of high school, and that stare means, “You better sit down right now, or you will have a date with the bathroom!”Therefore, I sat down with my team, “Where were you? We wer--” Chris shouted quietly. Dr. Houser, the scientist, interrupted him, “What your invention?” he said “invention” with a mocking tone. “We are turning it on right now”

The machine started, but the screen says “out of battery”

“Out of battery? This crap is powered by batteries? How sarcastic!” Shouted Dr. Houser loudly. Mr. Pribre was just about to send some one to the cleaning duty when he realizes the one shouting was the doctor.

“Leon, I told you to buy the blue batteries!” Chris shouted, again, quietly, “Jason, Leon, go to Safeway and buy some batteries!”(Yeah, the campus is big enough to fit a supermarket)

When we are about to get out of the education building, a black/purple black hole thingy appeared out of nowhere, sucking us in without anyone witnessing, without the chance to scream.

C&Cs are welcome!

Stay tune for updates!

Edited May 9, 201113 yr by bionicle factory

We were screaming, but the air pressure in the blackhole was to strong, it made me unconscious. Most people say that when you are about to die, your life flashes in front your eye. That's not true at all, or maybe I'm just not dying. I woke up, but I felt like elephants are crushing my body. I also felt frozen, no, I'm on fire, any, it hurts.

Leon disspeared, I don't care about that right now.

I saw sunlight, I'm about to exit the place.

Sorry, kinda short.

Again, C&Cs are welcome!

The feel in the blackhole is not like a tinkling feeling like in books, but high air pressured , it's enough to knock you out, but not enough to kill you. My senses slowly came back, and the frozen/burning feeling was gone; what replaced it was a soothing feeling. One bad thing happened, when I exited the hole, what welcomed me was about 4000 feet of freefalling in to the ocean. I remember I saw on Wikipedia that falling into to the water from the sky equals death, but hey, Wikipedia is some times fake! I hope that is fake.

Another thing that I realized was the tempture, I don't feel cold; in fact, I'm sweating. I looked around for land, none. But I did see some underwater landscapes. I'm ready for the water, I'm a top swimmer in the old school, before the acciddent. I don't feel scared, in fact, I'm kinda excited.

I started wondering about Leon's disspearence, what happened? I don't see him every where.

Maybe he's somewhere else, mayb-- SPLASH! Water, here I come! I dived into the water ( hey, Wikipedia's wrong!)

I saw light

I swam toward that light.

Of cource, comments and critiqes are still welcome!

Edited May 23, 201113 yr by bionicle factory

I found out that the light came from a undercave.

I realized I can somehow breath in water, what is this? Percy Jackson? Anyway, after I went into the light, I got electricfied. The sensation happened to my whole body. Burning. Hurting. Fainting.

I woke up with two people dragging me. I felt like I'm in the medivil times, but the place feels futuristic; even my handcuff looked like it's powered by plasma. You know, two circles connected by electricty. Visble electricty. Moving electricty. I got dragged into a office, a man looking like Johnny Deep with out the mustache is in there, "Hey, that no way to treat him!" Usually in movies, kind people are the evil people, but he doesen't feel evil. Or is this a "good cop, bad cop" thing? " "Hi, Jason Mine." he said it while looking at a paper stamped "TOP SECRET, Chao Factor Level 5 only"

"I prefer to be called only by the first name."

"Sorry Jason." he made a hand gesture and the other people got out of the room, he seemed to be in charge of things 'round here. The man is wearing a hat, detective style. But the room is sci-fi looking.

Contrast.

" Where in the @%$& am I?"

" Calm down, Jason. Deep breaths."

I did what he said.

We stared at each other for a long time. This one was different, people usually starts chating with me ASAP.

" My name is Evan, Evan Rowsarnarf," he said, " you can get out of here any time you want. But remember, it's not about the choice that you make, it's WHY you made that choice."

We have a name for that kind of logic: The Matrix Logic.

"Why am I here?"

"You are here because you are special," Evan said, " not short-bus special, SPECIAL."

"What do you mean?"

He ingnored the question. "you experinced a time when you're invincble. SHORT time."

The water and why I can breath under it. Wikipedia isn't wrong. I'm special.

bionicle factory, while I applaud your writing, at the same time this topic is not the sort of thing that really belongs on EB. The Community section of the boards is for everyone who has come here for LEGO anyway to discuss other things that are not LEGO-related, but a topic of your writing does not make for much discussion, as is evidenced by the lack of comments. There is some fan fiction on EB (as you may know) in the Action Figures section, but for the most part it is not something that fits on our boards.

I encourage you to continue your writing elsewhere, and perhaps find a website directed towards that sort of thing, but I am going to lock up this topic. Feel free to PM me if you wish to discuss it further.