Gregorovich Posted July 1, 2011 Posted July 1, 2011 (edited) After months of living rough, she just couldn't take it anymore. The police had been searching for her for, so she could no longer live in a place above ground incase they caught her. She couldn't even stay in a hotel in case the police found her, so she'd been living in a sewer. She had plenty of money, but she couldn't buy anything good because she had to move around just to be safe. The two officers who had been on the case had finally managed to track her down using tip offs from local people. The road had been closed off so they could get through the drain. They looked through the drain, and saw her lying there in a sleeping bag. She looked rather pathetic, lying there dirty, skinny and weak. They found it hard to believe that she had managed to live like that for so long. They quietly lifted up the cover so as not to let her know she was there. The thing they didn't know was that she was tired of running. She was tired of it all, and just couldn't continue with it. So she got up, took out her gun, and carried out her final escape plan: The Last Escape by Gregorovich9, on Flickr The Last Escape by Gregorovich9, on Flickr The officers lifting the drain cover off. The Last Escape by Gregorovich9, on Flickr The entire vignette. The Last Escape by Gregorovich9, on Flickr An aerial view. The Last Escape by Gregorovich9, on Flickr The sewage water. Visit my Flickr for more pictures. Comments and criticism are more than welcome. Thanks for looking! Edited July 1, 2011 by Gregorovich Quote
Follows Closely Posted July 1, 2011 Posted July 1, 2011 That fig with a gun to her head is a bit disturbing. Quote
Horry Posted July 1, 2011 Posted July 1, 2011 Argh! I followed the whole vignette-series and have come to like that caracter! Now you just build another one with a happy ending, sir, or I will get no sleep! on another note: I really like the dirty water feeling and the simplistic, yet realistic touch of the scene, well done again! Quote
Gregorovich Posted July 1, 2011 Author Posted July 1, 2011 That fig with a gun to her head is a bit disturbing. I suppose it is. But the situation can't exactly not be disturbing, can it? I mean, police hunting down a mysterious criminal, only to find her committing suicide in a dark, dirty sewer sounds quite disturbing to me! Argh! I followed the whole vignette-series and have come to like that caracter! Now you just build another one with a happy ending, sir, or I will get no sleep! on another note: I really like the dirty water feeling and the simplistic, yet realistic touch of the scene, well done again! Thank you, Horry, for the nice comments! Not to boast, but I do think the water looks quite good too (I was actually surprised at how many trans blue tiles I had!). I'm afraid you'll just have to not sleep tonight, because I doubt I'll be making anymore of these . I can't really think what else could be done in this story, because the main character is dead. Do you have any suggestions? Quote
lightningtiger Posted July 1, 2011 Posted July 1, 2011 Very dark 'Gregorovich', the character must have had some deep down problems. I guess crime doesn't pay in the end, but do they stop her.....well ? Quote
Peanuts Posted July 1, 2011 Posted July 1, 2011 (edited) Hmm, I would wouldn't have surrendered without some Third Man-like chase scene, but well... It's interesting how much emotions you can convey in a small vig. You can practically feel the desperation. It's not quite the ending I exspected, but I like it a lot. I just wonder why they build a manhole on the mid of a street. Oh, and the water looks really dirty, with the green plate under the trans blue tiles. Nicely done. Edited July 1, 2011 by Peanuts Quote
Gregorovich Posted July 1, 2011 Author Posted July 1, 2011 Very dark 'Gregorovich', the character must have had some deep down problems. I guess crime doesn't pay in the end, but do they stop her.....well ? Well, no. They don't stop her. That's why she shot herself . Hmm, I would wouldn't have surrendered without some Third Man-like chase scene, but well... It's interesting how much emotions you can convey in a small vig. You can practically feel the desperation. It's not quite the ending I exspected, but I like it a lot. I just wonder why they build a manhole on the mid of a street. Oh, and the water looks really dirty, with the green plate under the trans blue tiles. Nicely done. Thanks, Peanuts, I'm glad you like it! The reason the man hole is in the middle of the road is actually because of the parts available . Quote
icy brick Posted July 4, 2011 Posted July 4, 2011 (edited) Dead...huh? Sadly she couldn´t use the money Anyway every good story end´s sadly Edit: idea to next part: she could wake up in the mortuary ? Edited July 4, 2011 by icy brick Quote
Gregorovich Posted July 4, 2011 Author Posted July 4, 2011 Dead...huh? Sadly she couldn´t use the money Anyway every good story end´s sadly Edit: idea to next part: she could wake up in the mortuary ? Thanks, icy brick! The mortuary idea is good, but remember she can't wake up because she is dead. Maybe it could be her funeral or something and no one turns up because she was a criminal? Quote
icy brick Posted July 4, 2011 Posted July 4, 2011 Yes dead... ---- Well somekind thing with the money..... where did the money go ? Quote
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