THE RED RIVER FLOWS (Work In Progress/WIP)

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I have made some brickfilms in the past, but every Summer I work on a slightly large scale film for the yearly Bricks in Motion contest.

This year was a historical theme so i'm putting together a horror film that takes place in the late 18th century involving witches.

I am aware that a smarter time period would be during the Salem Witch Trials, but I wasn't too fond of that time period, plus I

have much more pre-revolutionary war figures. So I wrote a screenplay for the project that turned out to be around 75 pages long.

MISS LYNDON AND HENRY (Clip One)

Miss Lyndon and Henry are two of the group of leading characters in the film, and here's a

brief argument scene between them about the horrific tragedy that happened to open up

the film.

Clip One

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t4eZOKoiQxI

Funeral of Caroline Lyndon (Clip Two: No audio, rough cut)

Here's a look into the funeral of Caroline Lyndon, a young girl. Now this is the rough cut,

more was filmed and added onto it and the arrangement of clips was changed.

Clip Two

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w8K-qgLQ6Ns

Anyways, please leave feedback regarding the clips so I can improve when i'm filming more if it.

Thanks!

Edited September 17, 201113 yr by Rufus
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It's pretty good.

But may I suggest to use some diferent camera angles or perhaps even some wideshots in the coversation. (first clip)

It gets a bit repetitive after a while cause of the frequently reused camera angles.

Good job though, and I'd like to see the result!

Just released the trailer for "The Red River Flows" to YouTube : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8yJV2icKw94