Dannylonglegs Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 Again, Karie, your backstory kicks @$$! ~Insectoid Aristocrat Quote
Kintobor Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 Thank you! It took me a while to make, and trying to get Kayla to look like Kayla without the hair was tough. Thank god for Les Mis and Fontaine selling her hair! As for the eye patched man, expect him to reappear, as well as Karie's adoptive sister. I've got some ideas where I'm going to implement them, but it's all about doing it naturally. What is that "one" link, though? I can't get it to work... I'm not sure which link you're talking about... Quote
Endgame Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 "It'll only make things more difficult when I return home to my wife and I bring two orphans instead of one. If it would ease you, keep the money. You could easily start up your own business, get a house, anything with that money! I will ensure she lives a good life. I cannot idly stand by as both yourself and your sister starve here. With your sister gone, you will have less of a burden on your shoulders. Please, let me help you." First line. Quote
Kintobor Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 I have no clue what that was there for! I've fixed it though! Quote
Scorpiox Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 I have no clue what that was there for! I've fixed it though! Looks to me that it's the link to a PM. Hmm... Quote
Endgame Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 Looks to me that it's the link to a PM. Hmm... Soooo... Would now be a good time to break out the tinfoil hats? Quote
Kintobor Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 I asked Sandy if he wanted it as the quest epilogue, but he said he already had one, so I posted it in the hall. That's probably the pm you're talking about. Quote
Scorpiox Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 Soooo... Would now be a good time to break out the tinfoil hats? No! That's the worse thing to do! The tin foil hat only makes it easier for them to scan your brain! It's a lie! Don't do it! Noooooooooo... Quote
Shoker86 Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 Great backstory Kintobor. Nicely done. This quest have a lot of potential for your character development Quote
Kintobor Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 We've seen Karie Prime, Sorceress Karie, Alien Infiltrator Karie, and now I present the next part in the line up of alternate Karie's: Apprentice Karie! When the Stealer insisted on asking for compensation, one thing that entered my head was "Oh god, Karie's going to have to enter the Stealer's servitude as the the Apprentice's replacement!" Of course she didn't, but this is what she would have looked like had she. It should be noted she has the Heirloom dagger on her, and not Sexy. Quote
Endgame Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 (edited) All of my villains are just brokenhearted pariahs... The Stealer is actually the most affable guy in my lineup, to be honest. He isn't that much of a bastard. The only reason he was so paranoid and ornery in 56 was because you murdered his last family member/son-figure. (Desite being 25 and The Apprentice 20.) Edited June 1, 2013 by Endgame Quote
Kintobor Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 It's more than I can say about my next villain! I pretty much took Zoran Lazarevic and Zachary Hale Comstock and put them in a blender! He won't be introduced in A Secret Under Eubric, but come the next quest in the arc I ensure everyone on it will be in for one hell of a treat! Quote
Endgame Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 (edited) Freudian breakdown of Endgame's baddies: Rhodus: Lost his mother and father in one day, implied to be mentally unstable. Twisted by The Regret. Aquos: Born blind and was threatened with execution, even as a baby. Ostracized by other larvae his age. Twisted by The Regret. Eidolon: Forced by his slavemasters to beat his two younger brothers, even as infants. Twisted by The Regret. The Regret: Life gave him the middle finger in every way possible. Apprentice: Lost most of his family to crime, ended up obsessive and sadistic becaused of it. The Stealer: ??? Edited June 1, 2013 by Endgame Quote
Dannylonglegs Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 (edited) Obviously the end result is "PROFIT". Someone call for Fleur? She's got some Freudian issues herself... ~Insectoid Aristocrat Edited June 1, 2013 by Dannylonglegs Quote
Palathadric Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 I have to say I would have liked to see Guts buy the catsuit for Nerwen. Quote
Dannylonglegs Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 I have to say I would have liked to see Guts buy the catsuit for Nerwen. Would have liked for him to have bought it for himself... ~Insectoid Aristocrat Quote
Scubacarrot Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 Come on Flipz, you did not just quote the all american rejects. That's bad even for you. I totally saw them live, at a festival. Quote
Flipz Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 Come on Flipz, you did not just quote the all american rejects. That's bad even for you. I totally saw them live, at a festival. It's a BIONICLE song, I can't not quote it. Quote
Palathadric Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 (edited) Would have liked for him to have bought it for himself... Poor suit. I would have liked to see Nerwen's reaction though. Edited June 1, 2013 by Palathadric Quote
Scubacarrot Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 (edited) I'll be honest, I know next to nothing about Bionicle, hehe. As for Nerwen's reaction, it would have been pretty good, I imagine. Edited June 1, 2013 by Scubacarrot Quote
Kintobor Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 "It's a girl." "It's a girl, Mrs. Raltyn, it's a girl!" (Tommy plug, because The Who's awesome!) Quote
Endgame Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 Waiting for the reveal where without that "Smelly undead guy" Karie wouldn't exist. Quote
Cutcobra Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 Wow, that backstory was amazing! It was so good I just wanna tear Karie's cat suit apart. Quote
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