Hi ! i present you my first diorama on the mustafar planet,but he's not totally finish.

Here is the river of volcan and rocks

Here is Obi Wan Kenobi on the little platform

Here is Anakin Skywalker on a droid.

I hate You !!!!! A Legendary scene...

sorry if it's poorly written, I'm french

Here is Obi Wan Kenobi on the little platform

Since when does Kenobi have a brown beard?

Nice little Diorama, I especially liked the two little platforms and I think they really enhanced the scene.

As some constructive criticism, I would suggest you cover up the holes between the rocks, they were interesting but the holes distracted me.

I like the way you've used plates to create the rocks, but maybe try to cover up the squareness of the last rock. Make it look a bit more natural.

Looks promising, one thing though, I would change both of the hairpieces.

I like the effect of the lava and the burning Ana/Darth

Perhaps you can use some dark grey and black dots to make at least the bottom of the slope going into the lava look more coal like?

Keep bricking