MOC: Mirrorverse Breez

[zero1312]

Remember the alternate universe I mentioned in this topic? http://www.eurobricks.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=68704 This moc is a character from said universe.

This is Natalie Breez from the alternate universe where Nova came from. She was ordered to intercept Nova and terminate her, but was sucked into the wormhole too, which Nova did not notice, unfortunately. Now she is waiting in space for a ship she can capture to continue her mission.

Ability- and personality-wise she is the opposite of the regular Breez. She is brutal, merciless and, surprisingly, very vain. She has added five! addiotal cores to her body as "accessories", thinks herself as the prettiest girl around and cries like a baby when even one of her nails breaks.

Edited May 27, 2012 by zero1312

[Kadabra]

I like it, but it's pretty much a Hulk recolor if I'm not mistaken. IT does have a nice aesthetic, though. i like how all your MoCs tie into your storyline, ever thought about writing a fanfiction?

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[Aanchir]

Errrmmm... Not sure what to think of this MOC. For one thing, it's mostly a recolor of Hulk. Some of the changes you made are a bit awkward, like the extra Hero Cores, which end up feeling distracting rather than helpful.

But most importantly, I have to say the Hulk's build simply does not work for a female character. I was wondering whether (and fearing that) someone would use Hulk's chestplate for a Breez MOC, but even now I can't tell if your intention was to use it ironically or taking the "they're robots; they don't have to look feminine" line seriously. I'm afraid making a female character this absurdly masculine just doesn't work for me.

The one thing I do like about this MOC is the color scheme, which is organized somewhat nicely with the exception of all the extra Hero Cores.

[zero1312]

Thanks for your honest opinion. I wanted her to be the opposite of the regular Breez in almost every way. The regular looks slender, so this has to look bulky...

I wanted to differenciate the two universes.

[CabooseBM]

Well I like it a lot. Matches your idea for the character perfectly.

Well okay, the legs are rather skinny and could use some real bulking up, but aside from that it works perfectly.

[Cirkit]

All I have to say is this-

BREEZ SMASH!

All joking aside, the build is very Hulk, and not one that I particularly enjoy. However, the color scheme is nice, and keeps to the look of Mirroverse's 'good' set. The length added to the legs is quite welcome, to me it makes her look a bit more threatening than Hulk with his puny little legs, and the back makes her look very solid, and those blades.. I'm getting a Transformers-windflap vibe from those.

The only things I truly dislike are the Hero cores on the knee cladding. The hand cores aren't that bad, but the leg cores are distracting. Perhaps if they were replaced by another set of Breez shoulder-bubble pads they might look better? I get that the Hulk build isn't as good as others, but it needs to be improved upon somehow. The method used to connect the blades to the back looks good, fills in the gaps a bit more, and I like that. Overall it's not a bad MOC, and the backstory is quite interesting. :)

[turtleman2020]

I thInk this moc is great and it looks like an alt. universe breez it's completely opposite from the original , but it looks great. Also I actually like the extra cores. are the extra cores ment to give her more power?

[DraikNova]

While it is very Hulk-like, I feel like this MOC is supposed to be like that, and overall, I like it!

[zero1312]

I thInk this moc is great and it looks like an alt. universe breez it's completely opposite from the original , but it looks great. Also I actually like the extra cores. are the extra cores ment to give her more power?

This question is answered in her Bio in the first post...