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Get them nutz and bolts

I think you might need to try again.

Hm...interesting. First of all, could you deeplink your picture? Next, I like what you've got, although it's pretty simple. If you could up the detail, adding some tan pieces on the bridge and the grass, like some grass pieces. Just a few bricks isn't enough. Try some SNOT-ing! I bet you can make this into a fantastic MOC!

I have deep linked the image for you.

If you don't know how to do this (in case you ever need to post a picture again), there is a link to a tutorial in my signature.

Cool, it looks pretty simple though and it could certainly use some more detail.

It looks ok as a starting point for room for improvement, as already suggested, I think some snot would work wonders for this. Also have a look at how some people have achieved water effects out of lego trans-colour plates, it can make a hell of a difference from water looking 'ok' to looking 'very detailed'.

It certainly has some good potential for a great scene though!