Ruins of Im Fur

[Brickington]

With this moc, I would like to came the Sheriff of Avalonia title.

Lately in Hanaco, there had been a thief who became well known. He earned the name of Kev the Rogue. Thus, one day Lord Brickington gathered some of his soldiers and went on to hunting Kev the Rougue. They found him near the great city of Im Fur. They him until he had no place to go.

Brickington's soldiers captured the thief and were told to scout the area. Brickington wanted to see what this strange place was.

Brickington looked around and knew this place had to be Im Fur. "But how?" He thought. "Im Fur was the capital of the Kingdom of Hanaco." When Avalonia took over the land, Brickington father built a new city, Hanaco City to be the capital of the Lordship. Although mostly abandoned, Im Fur was never brought to ruins, in fact, Brickington father visited the old city often to make sure that it was kept well.

But then, Brickington looked over and saw a dead Hanacon soldier. This didn't make sense. There shouldn't be anything dead in Im Fur. Especially a Hanacon soldier. Hanacon Soldiers were Brickington's father's elite guard, but why would a dead one be here? Could this have anything to do with the mysterious disappearance of Brickington's father? Maybe Kev the Rogue knows something. After all, he did bring the chase here.

To be Continued...

[-Carson Haupt-]

I love how you used the axe blade on his helmet!

[soccerkid6]

Some more slopes/bricks on the BURP (Big ugly rock piece) would improve the landscaping in my opinion.

The posing of the figs is excellent though and the story is interesting

[kibosh]

Have you tried putting white hands on the skeletal soldier? He looks a little odd without them.

[Maxim I]

You know how to write an interesting story!!!

And combine it with a good MOC

Com'on Com'on I want to see the next chapter!!!

One advice for the posing of your sigfig: make him lend a bit forward in the future. Now it looks like he is just catapulted away from the horse

[Brickington]

Some more slopes/bricks on the BURP (Big ugly rock piece) would improve the landscaping in my opinion.

The posing of the figs is excellent though and the story is interesting

Thanks, I'll try that next time!

Have you tried putting white hands on the skeletal soldier? He looks a little odd without them.

I know I have them, but I can't seem to find them.

You know how to write an interesting story!!!

And combine it with a good MOC

Com'on Com'on I want to see the next chapter!!!

One advice for the posing of your sigfig: make him lend a bit forward in the future. Now it looks like he is just catapulted away from the horse

Thanks for the advice, I might post Chapter 2 today or tomorrow, perhaps with Brickington's fortress.