This is kind-of a grab-out-of-the-bag story

MOUNTAIN CITY:

CHAPTER I: The Beginning

A long time ago in a Lego Universe, well actual, about 11 years ago, in a Lego Galaxy far, far away. There was a great evil. The Brickster, the most evilest brick on Brick, wanted to take the world to pieces. He had to get the tallest point on Brick, which is Mountain City's tallest point.

Mountain City was the first dicovered city on Brick. It has 5 levels of buildings and fun. It was the first place to start the world-famous sport, Brickecht. Brickecht is a sport with 1 basketball, 2 flying bricks, and a orange stud. There are 7 players on each teams. People fly on Lances, swords, and regular, old, city brooms.

There is a villege by Mountain City. A villege called Bricksmeade. Bricksmeade is the small villege by the world famous school, Legowarts School of Lego Craft and Brickedzry. The school was made to teach young bricks to build with special powers.

So, The Brickster made a legion of Brickster-Bots. Brickster-Bots are the elite minions of the Brickster. He used dead Toa bodies, and he hired men for him too. Then he sent them to Mountain City, and a war began.

The war was bloody. Bricks flew everwhere. The bots would fall down and get right back-up. The war ended 3 months. The Brickster and the Brick Empire was born. The Empire would have slave traders to have slaves clean the place and do all the work. Then the Legozillon was born.

The Legozillon was a rebel band of slaves that fought the Empire. The war lasted another 5 months and the war was won by the Legozillon. The Brickster was thrown down and put in jail for entirnity. He is weak and he could barley lift a claw. The Brickster-Bots were forced to retreat to under the STUNT RAMP OF DEATH!!!!!!!!!! But, of course, nobody knows that except The Brickster. 11 years have passed and he still in the big, bad, brick house. I have arrived to Mountain City and don't know what comes ahead.

What do you think?? Is it *y* or *n* ??

More chapters to come!

very interesting...

The Brickster, the most evilest brick on Brick, wanted to take the world to pieces. He had to get the tallest point on Brick, which is Mountain City's tallest point.

More chapters to come!

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Its a good story dude I like it. *vader* *yoda* *alien*

The next Chapter of Mountain City will be on Tuesday!! Can't wait to right it!

Dude I cant wait for Chapter 2

How many chapters are there going to be dude! X-D *alien* *y*

I'm confused. This guy wants to knock down a giant LEGO brick and what will he get out of it???

Add some depth and this could become a nice (And colorful) story.

I'm confused. This guy wants to knock down a giant LEGO brick and what will he get out of it???

Add some depth and this could become a nice (And colorful) story.

No, no, no!! Brick is the planet!

Oh. Now I understand! He must get to the highest point in Brick. I still think it needs more depth. For example, why is this high point important? What will Brickster get from this? I'm not saying spoil the story, just give some more understanding to the readers and you could have a very creative story.

CHAPTER II: LIFE IN MOUNTAIN CITY

Since those 11, evil years, more people moved into Mountain City. I moved there as well. Brick Eaters, mass murders that eat bricks and kill, worked for The Brickster. They still roam Mountain City, and kill as much as they did 11 years ago. I've been banned from Mountain City because I tried to kill one. Stupid, People.

I had to live in peaceful Bricksmeade. I made a new friend named Austin. He didn't know the difference of a brick and a traffic cop. We became wanted after a while, because we got cool costumes to kill people all over the place. Austin was known as Austie Frostie, and I was known as Freak.

There was also another murder LEGO named Lars Brickseige. He wears a TIE Fighter helmet, and a Viking War body with green legs. He is The Brickster's most loyal servant. Also, The Brickster is known as "He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named".

"What the heck is going on!??" I asked Austin as I was outside Mountain City's Hospital. The hospital was suprisingly moved to 3rd floor instead of 1st floor. Last night, Lars came to the Mountain City Army Field, which is on 3rd floor. He murdered the whole squad. Also, he assaitatated the mayor, The Infomaniac. We were on a hunt to find The Brickster's lair. And we suspected that The Brickster's lair is under the large stunt ramp that people with cars and skateboards jump of the mountain and kill themselves.

"Well, I think something blew up," Austin said. Pepper Roni, our only friend that knows that two boys are killing people, is trying to lower me into the gap by the ramp.

"Hey, Austin! There is a number of Brickster-Bot over there," Pepper said. Austin turned around and pulled out his Sparten 5000 Brick Shot-Gun and started to shoot the Brickster-Bots. Bricks and minifigs flew all around. Some blood splashed on Austin's face. He liked to drink the blood of his enemy's body. See? I told you he was weird!!

We dived down the ramp, careful not to fall off the mountain. We noticed nobody was there except Lars Brickseige.

"What the heck??!!" said Lars, dumbfounded. Austin pulled out his Shot-Gun and started to fire. BAM!! BAM!!!! BAM!!!! :-/ He missed every single shot. "What the- YOU BLEW MY ARM OFF!!" shouted Brickseige, frustrated.

"Ha, MHAHAHHAHA!!!!!!!!!!" Yelled Austin, happily. "Hey, you!! Stupid!! Do you have any nachos???" I came up to Lars and knocked him off the mountain. Brickseige grabbed me when I knocked him off.

"Hey, you people reading this chapter!!" I shouted. "It's TO BE CONTINUED!!"

PEOPLE READING: Awwwwwww, man!!!!