Amon Hen battle

[OrcSan]

This is my first moc on Eurobriks and I hope you like it. Feel free to ask any questions .

[odidoma]

Nice fight(s)! I really like the pile of orcs, you really made it good. Keep building!

[Captain Settle]

Nice MOC, but the ground is a bit bare. In a MOC without buildings it is important to fill up the ground with lots of details. Just putting tiles and plates down can improve the look, and use plants as well. Also the stream is above the banking, but it should be lower than it. Like I said before, use tiles and plates to make a banking. That aside, I love the Isengard flag you have used.

[OrcSan]

Thanks a lot for the suggestions , I am in dire need of plants and pieces for trees, most of them I used on first pictures with the waterfall. I am sure that I will remake this scene sooner or later when I get some more foliage and perhaps I will try to make the Amon Hen structure just like in the movies, I consider it one of the most coolest scenes in Lotr trilogy.

[Ragnar_Deerslayer]

The pictures look like you're trying to tell the fight sequentially. There's a lot of good action there and some good shots. Have you considered making a comic of them using the resources in the Brick Flicks & Comics forum? Adding in some of the dialogue from the movies in captions or speech balloons and working with the frames on a page would increase the impact of the fight.

Ragnar

[SheepEater]

Nice MOC. Added to index.

But where's the banana???

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Edited July 13, 2013 by SheepEater

[OrcSan]

Yes , I was really thinking about making a comic book stile action and I love making fighting scenes and try and create a dynamic feel to it. First of all I want to make a better nature by adding foliage and making it a little more realisting (I am not sure if this is the correct term) before making dialog scenes and all... I am glad you guys come with suggestions and that makes me want to build something better asap :)

I am afraid I have no banana available , but I will find something else I promise ( anyone got a chicken to spare ? :P )

[BlueberryWaffles]

Nice! I like the waterfall. Lurtz seems pretty angry that he's walking around in his underwear though.

[Grimmbeard]

Not bad for a first MOC. And it tells a story, which is pretty cool . I definitely agree that you should make some comics, as there are quite a few action-packed pics in there.

[Faefrost]

He killed poor Jerry!