Fleet Posted August 9, 2013 Posted August 9, 2013 This is my first MOC to post on the forums. I hope the picture sizing is done correctly. I would like this scored if possible. Fleet anxiously awaited his first assignment as new member of the Rebellion, but he was slightly disappointed when he read through his first briefing. Delivery duty? All this training and his first assignment was to drop off some supplies to a Rebel cell on Corellia. At least he would get took take out his speeder. It was the only thing he kept from his life before joining the Rebellion, and he looked forward to getting to take it for a spin. All went well on his assignment until during the drop off an Imperial patrol stumbled a little too close to the drop off point. With some speed and a little luck, Fleet was able to get the load inside without being seen. IMG_0030 by bb2dgree, on Flickr IMG_0031 by bb2dgree, on Flickr IMG_0035 by bb2dgree, on Flickr Here is another shot of the Speeder by itself. IMG_0033 by bb2dgree, on Flickr Quote
CMP Posted August 9, 2013 Posted August 9, 2013 Nice work. Loving the speeder and its color scheme. You may want to shorten the doorway and throw some details in the interior, and some sort of antenna/satellite on the roof with some lights would help to brighten things up a little. Quote
Wedge09 Posted August 9, 2013 Posted August 9, 2013 Nice work :thumbup: in particular with the speeder Quote
TWP Posted August 9, 2013 Posted August 9, 2013 Nice work! I really love the speeder and its colors! like CallMePie said, I agree that the interior could be improved and the roof needs some details too. a snotted floor might also improve the look of this MOC. Quote
Artizan Posted August 9, 2013 Posted August 9, 2013 The speeder design is superb, retro style SW! Quote
MstrOfPppts Posted August 9, 2013 Posted August 9, 2013 The roof needs some more work. Either some machinery, antena or at least some greeble. The speeder design is very nice, but I find it a bit too black blue and white. Maybe some more gray would help - to look like engines - for example the round studs could be gray. And it clearly lacks the windshield! I'm sure one of the troopers saw you guys and you're lucky he didn't bother to intervene! Quote
MKJoshA Posted August 9, 2013 Posted August 9, 2013 Very cool speeder! Love the use of the old style engines. Quote
Covi Posted August 9, 2013 Posted August 9, 2013 Speederdesign is really great but as MstrOfPppts stated, I also would try to put some sort of windscreen on it. Nice posing of the Rebel pilot hiding inside. Love it how he looks at the speeder and trying to hide! Quote
Brickdoctor Posted August 10, 2013 Posted August 10, 2013 Nice work with the speeder, very sleek. I agree that some detail and machinery on the roof and throughout the building would be a good addition, and I would also do something to smooth out or add detail to the street, something to break up the big flat grey expanse. Quote
Esurient Posted August 10, 2013 Posted August 10, 2013 Great work on the speeder! looking very nice! Quote
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