[MOC] Edge of the ending——Perseus&Tosix

[FrogShaw]

Hello,everybody!!

I 'm Shaw.And I 'm a chinese.And I 'm not good in English.

I 'm here to present my MOC to all of you.

And at the same time,I wanna improve my skill.

So let 's my MOC——Perseus&Tosix

It 's my first topic in any english forum.

I hope that you 'll enjoy it~~

At first,the Perseus~~

Next,the Tosix~~

Let them fight!!

Ahahahaha~~Do you like this MOC I present to you?

With your suggestion I believe I will be better~~

See you next time!!

[xxlrocka]

Okay, where to begin.... nice complex builds! Must've taken days to build these things! Unfortunately, that is the problem for the Perseus guy. He's just way too skinny. He's as skeletal as a skeleton! You need to work on builds like that so they have much more armour.

Second, the green guy. He's okay. He has enough armour, although it's hard to see from his four-legged position. The one thing I would change is that I would try to cover up the axle connectors somehow.

Overall, good MOCs, but they are too empty.

[WARHEAD]

I really like Tosix' body type, very unique and giant monster-like.

[Jetrax99]

Bloody amazing and complex! Also Welcome to EB.

[VBBN]

A few too many colors going on with Tosix for my taste, those red ball joints in particular throw things off, and the color scheme just seems a bit jumbled. many shades of green, yellow, etc. Though I do like the combination of hero factory armor with a complex build; Something that isn't easy to pull off.

I must ask, were these made with Pacific Rim in mind? A lot of those action pictures are very reminiscent of the fight scenes in the movie. (I know it's not the first time we've seen robots fighting monsters, but the similarities there are quite apparent)

[FrogShaw]

A few too many colors going on with Tosix for my taste, those red ball joints in particular throw things off, and the color scheme just seems a bit jumbled. many shades of green, yellow, etc. Though I do like the combination of hero factory armor with a complex build; Something that isn't easy to pull off.

I must ask, were these made with Pacific Rim in mind? A lot of those action pictures are very reminiscent of the fight scenes in the movie. (I know it's not the first time we've seen robots fighting monsters, but the similarities there are quite apparent)

Yes....quite currect you are...I really like this film...

Okay, where to begin.... nice complex builds! Must've taken days to build these things! Unfortunately, that is the problem for the Perseus guy. He's just way too skinny. He's as skeletal as a skeleton! You need to work on builds like that so they have much more armour.

Second, the green guy. He's okay. He has enough armour, although it's hard to see from his four-legged position. The one thing I would change is that I would try to cover up the axle connectors somehow.

Overall, good MOCs, but they are too empty.

Thank you for your advice!!Really useful!!I 'll build my next MOC with them!!