[SoNE Episode 1]: Precious Cargo

[Ritz Brick]

"We were ordered to bring aboard as many rebels that were escaping Bespin as as possible. Even though I was flying a cargo ship, we had moved our security files into another room to hold some troopers. Calling the holding cell cramped was an understatement. There was extra emphasis on not allowing those tricky rebels any chance to escape. The Empire spared no expense in extra Stormtrooper guards. But we remembered what they did to our fellow soldiers on the Death Star."

BZZ BZZ BZZ. "The alarm going off telling us there were some incoming fighters attempting to intercept us. I came rushing down the hallway towards to cockpit for my co-pilot needed some assistance".

"Luckily enough one of our escort fighters arrived. I think we'll be alright from here on out."

[Bkrosell]

nice build, I like the cell, well done with the hall to, try adding something in front of the cells, its just to empty,

Edited September 21, 2013 by Bkrosell

[Ritz Brick]

nice build, I like the cell, well done with the hall to, try adding something in front of the cells, its just to empty,

I actually did have the entire hallway built, but trying to take pictures was near impossible, also made it seem a bit to much like a building IMO

[Bkrosell]

I actually did have the entire hallway built, but trying to take pictures was near impossible, also made it seem a bit to much like a building IMO

What I meant is on the gray baseplate, try expanding and adding some detail, you have all of tomorrow to tweak it, you have a great start.

[MstrOfPppts]

I presume that the white hall is on the outer side of the ship so it ends there. That could easily be represented by skipping the base plate. Create a simple gray or dark gray base for this MOC and remove the baseplate. With all the studs sticking out it really looks unfinished - as if something had to go there ... The cell is nicely done and also the walls have quite some detail. Also maybe tiling the top of the walls would add a nice finish.

[Nom Carver]

Good build, I recomend adding some details on the exterior and if the other side of the wall is not intended to have anything behind, try to take shots that dont show it so much.

I like tha wall .

[LegoFjotten]

Nice cell and wall! I think it would look a lot better without the baseplate and with the top of the walls smoothed out though.

[Rogue Angel]

The first pic is excellent, and I really like the cell. When I build facade MOCs, I stick with the tight shots, and don't bother with the large overall picture. I really like the forced perspective shot of the fighter battle as well. Nice job!

[Brickdoctor]

I agree that the baseplate's empty space makes it look unfinished. I would try adding in some more curves and angles and elements commonly seen in the halls of SW ships, in order to avoid that problem you mentioned of it looking too much like a building.

[kermit]

I like how you built the cell. Why is the guy wearing hand cuffs in the cell?