MKJoshA Posted November 26, 2013 Posted November 26, 2013 OoC: See the rest of the story: First They Came For the Qwohogs A Brother's Work Is Never Done A Night At Hao's The Breakout Commandeered Escape I ditched the stormtrooper armor in a dumpster alone the way. My brother would just have to get another set. Next we left the speeder about a mile outside Coronet City. A two mile hike later lead us to what seemed to be the middle of nowhere. MKJoshA: You know, if you're planning on killing me and hiding my body you could have done it 2 miles back and saved us both the trouble. Yeoman: No, MKJoshA, I do not give my trust without cause. I meant it when I said I trusted you. He started moving some branches out of the way and I realized he was uncovering a tunnel. We started climbing down. A minute later my feet made a metallic thud as they hit the ground. MKJoshA: What is this place? Yeoman pushed a few buttons and the lights came on. He rummaged around in a corner and pulled out a short cloak and hood and put them on. Yeoman: We still don't know. There are many of these tunnels all over Corellia but no one in the Alliance has idea who created them. And if anyone in the Empire knows they haven't made it public knowledge. But it makes for a great temporary hideout. I looked around and was amazed at how organized the tunnel looked. Whoever put them here definitely had a reason to do so. This stretch of tunnel only went a dozen meters in each direction before a wall of dirt blocked the way. There were many different spots where the metal housing had been broken up revealing the wires and electronics underneath. It looked as though Yeoman had tapped into one of the power casings and had set up a transmission station. Yeoman: I'll contact the Alliance and find out what they want to do with us. A few hours later I had spoken with two different Rebel leaders answering all of their questions. They decided I wasn't a security threat but still wanted to question me further the first chance I had to make it to a real base. MKJoshA: Well that's that. I'm in and I'm not going back. Yeoman: Yes, it's good to have another being supporting the cause. Even one as reckless as yourself. MKJoshA: Hey, that recklessness got you out of jail didn't it? We continued to talk until we both fell asleep from exhaustion. The next morning Yeoman received a transmission saying we were needed to help with a crisis on Bespin... OoC: Please judge as a free build. Quote
MstrOfPppts Posted November 26, 2013 Posted November 26, 2013 That's a really neat story. The build is is nice and smooth though a bit square. I presume that brown plates are dirt, so it's a bit funny how they are rounded in the corners and the exact same destiation from all the edges. I'd mess it up a bit to give it a more organic feel. Quote
MKJoshA Posted December 10, 2013 Author Posted December 10, 2013 (edited) Is it wrong of me to post on my own build just so it'll go back to the top of the page so people will see it so I can garner some more feedback? Edited December 10, 2013 by MKJoshA Quote
gazumpty Posted December 11, 2013 Posted December 11, 2013 Hey this is a really cool wee build...I love the reveal from above and the contrasting above and below ground details. Being a total newbie here but what is 'Freebuild' :) Great work though! Quote
MKJoshA Posted December 12, 2013 Author Posted December 12, 2013 Hey this is a really cool wee build...I love the reveal from above and the contrasting above and below ground details. Being a total newbie here but what is 'Freebuild' :) Great work though! A "Freebuild" is an entry for the SoNE on-going contest for personal XP. It isn't an official contest entry, just an additional build you want judged for SoNE. Quote
gazumpty Posted December 12, 2013 Posted December 12, 2013 Thanks for the explanation....another stupid question now...whereabouts can I have a look to take part in this. This looks like a fun way to keep the Lego Imagination working :D Quote
Bob De Quatre Posted December 12, 2013 Posted December 12, 2013 Is it wrong of me to post on my own build just so it'll go back to the top of the page so people will see it so I can garner some more feedback? It is wrong! But I remember that MOC, and that's one I forgot to comment when I got home from work... It's a simple MOC, with an uncommon size (14x16), but very well made. I really like how you did the tunnel shape and how it is "cut". The MOC and the story work well together! Quote
pihlbrick Posted December 12, 2013 Posted December 12, 2013 Thanks for the explanation....another stupid question now...whereabouts can I have a look to take part in this. This looks like a fun way to keep the Lego Imagination working :D Wattos Junkyard is the overall Star Wars contest forum http://www.eurobricks.com/forum/index.php?showforum=114 Shadows of Nar Eubrikka (SoNE) is the current contest http://www.eurobricks.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=85286 Rules for SoNE http://www.eurobricks.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=85285 Current contest: Episode III http://www.eurobricks.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=89320 Quote
MKJoshA Posted December 12, 2013 Author Posted December 12, 2013 It is wrong! I'll be more discreet about it next time Quote
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