Simon_S Posted January 5, 2014 Posted January 5, 2014 Chapter 1: The Little Vagabond Tavern Chapter 2: The Discovery of Nalderic Chapter 3: A Warm Welcome Challenge 1 (A): A Bad Nocty! So Simon passed the ring of fire and now arrived at the castle of the Genius Malignus. First it looked like nobody was there... Abruptly, a genie stood in front of him. Humius: "Hello, I'm Humius. What's your name and where are you from?" Simon: "I'm Simon and I come from... Nocturnus." Humius: "Of course you're from Nocturnus, but where in Nocturnus?" Simon: "Eeeh... it's a small village near the ring of fire..." Humius: "Very nice to meet you! You should get know my friends. Voltarius and Cartesius come to me! Here's an Avalonian!" Voltarius: "Welcome Simon of Nalderic. Nice to meet you!" Cartesius: "Welcome to the Castle of Lies. I'm the leader of the Genius Malignus. You must be very stupid or very strong that you've come here alone. So, what do you want here?" Simon: "Why did you know that I'm from Avalonia? I mean, I'm dressed like a Nocty, I wear a nocty armor and I carry a nocty weapon. I thought it would be impossible that someone recognizes me. Voltarius: "We're the Genius Malignus, didn't you know? A birdbrained man, called René, once did thought experiment. He imagined, that there would be a ghost from which comes all knowledge that the humans have. The only aim of this ghost is, to fool the humans. That's why he called us "malignus". But then René did something even more stupid. From our possible living he concluded our inevitable existence. And so he created us and now we're damned to live in oil lamps, wear purple shirts and have long hair. To say it short: We're ghosts, we know anything." Simon: "Wow, that sounds pretty crazy. An Elf called Remigias sent me to you. I'm looking for the Herba Absynthii. They captured my friends and if I don't bring him this herb, he'll keep them as prisoneers forever. Can you help me to get it?" Cartesius: "You seem pretty confident and we like that. But you have to know that we don't like Remigias at all. So what will we do now?" Simon: "Just help me to get my friends back, please!" Humius: "You convinced me. Let's go." Voltarius and Cartesius: "Wait for us, we'll accompany you. This cabbage only grows on one place, which still is controlled by the old regime." Simon: "I already killed a bad Nocty on the way here, so I have no problems doing that again. I will fight against Lord Ssilyrrlith. Will you help me?" All 3 genies: "Yes." Simon: "Look there, is this white one a Herba Absynthii?" Cartesius: "Yes it is, but there are two guards we need to get rid of. Voltarius: "They aren't humans, so we can't spook them. And killing would ethically viewed be totally incorrect. So there must be another way." Simon: "What about distracting them?" Humius: "Yes, that's a good idea. Look now, this will be awesome." Cartesius: "That was clever, my friend. Giving them some food and we already have our Herba Absynthii. But Simon, I forbid you to bring it to Remigias. Do you know what power this cabbage has? With it, you can easily free your friends and take the lead over Nalderic..." Voltarius: "So you're free to leave. We have to stay here and keep fighting against Lord Ssilyrrlith. I wish you best of luck!" To be continued... Quote
Infernum Posted January 5, 2014 Posted January 5, 2014 Nice build! Love the gold cobblestone and flowers in the arches. Some of the lines in the story are hilarious! Love the stonework! The Herba Absynthii is a cabbage? Quote
Lord Vladivus Posted January 5, 2014 Posted January 5, 2014 Nice entry! The whole thing is amazing! Love the story! Quote
Gunman Posted January 5, 2014 Posted January 5, 2014 beautiful moc simon! nice details and colours Quote
soccerkid6 Posted January 5, 2014 Posted January 5, 2014 I'm quite impressed with how many colors you used in the main building, yet they still all come together nicely Great water effects and rockwork too Clever use of flowers on the bottom side of arches and the palace feel of the building comes across nicely Also that large feast was surely an effective way to distract the guards Quote
Cara Posted January 6, 2014 Posted January 6, 2014 Lovely organization of such a small space, love the flow of the build and the detail on each side. I like the way you used those chrome gold dragon heads Quote
Simon_S Posted January 6, 2014 Author Posted January 6, 2014 Nice build! Love the gold cobblestone and flowers in the arches. Some of the lines in the story are hilarious! Love the stonework! The Herba Absynthii is a cabbage? Thanks Infernum! Nice entry! The whole thing is amazing! Love the story! Thank you beautiful moc simon! nice details and colours Thanks mate! I'm quite impressed with how many colors you used in the main building, yet they still all come together nicely Great water effects and rockwork too Clever use of flowers on the bottom side of arches and the palace feel of the building comes across nicely Also that large feast was surely an effective way to distract the guards Thanks you SK! Lovely organization of such a small space, love the flow of the build and the detail on each side. I like the way you used those chrome gold dragon heads Thank you Cara. I tried to include every single chrome piece I found, so the dragon heads also had to be used somehow . I'm quite happy with the result. Quote
Tomsche Posted January 6, 2014 Posted January 6, 2014 The story you got running here is great. I knida like the whole cabbage for quest idea, feels very Pyhtonesque, and the build is just awesome, the gold and purples have a very 'royal' feel to it Quote
Gideon Posted January 7, 2014 Posted January 7, 2014 Bold choices of color and good job with the story writing Quote
Niku Posted January 9, 2014 Posted January 9, 2014 Colors, story, building, everything is attractive on this one. Excellent job. Quote
de Gothia Posted January 10, 2014 Posted January 10, 2014 Wow! The colours on the first moc is just great! Not the once you usually see in builds but they work perfect together! The story is also very good! Well done! Quote
Rogue Angel Posted January 18, 2014 Posted January 18, 2014 Excellent build! I really like the texturing in the wall, and the use of the horizontal headlight bricks with the 1x1 round tiles. I also really like the colors you used - the sand blue goes very well on the front, and the pinks and purples work well on the back. The gold round tiles work very well for the floor as well. Great entry! Quote
Torgar Posted January 19, 2014 Posted January 19, 2014 Excellent colors and textures, and a great story, nice job! Quote
Lord Butters Posted January 19, 2014 Posted January 19, 2014 This build is so cool! Where is the purple from? Is it that new friends theme? I think it really stands out from the rest of the build, which can sometimes be difficult when building interiors. Quote
Simon_S Posted January 19, 2014 Author Posted January 19, 2014 The story you got running here is great. I knida like the whole cabbage for quest idea, feels very Pyhtonesque, and the build is just awesome, the gold and purples have a very 'royal' feel to it Thank you Tomsche . Bold choices of color and good job with the story writing Thanks Gideon. Nice build....you'd be great in Kaliphlin! Thank you. People already told me that after my Challenge VI entry in Book I (attack on Cedrica) and I'd also like to be in Kaliphlin, but I sadly can't be in all 4 guilds the same time . Colors, story, building, everything is attractive on this one. Excellent job. Thanks Niku! Wow! The colours on the first moc is just great! Not the once you usually see in builds but they work perfect together! The story is also very good! Well done! Thanks mate. I wanted to create something unique, so I went with these unusual colours. Excellent build! I really like the texturing in the wall, and the use of the horizontal headlight bricks with the 1x1 round tiles. I also really like the colors you used - the sand blue goes very well on the front, and the pinks and purples work well on the back. The gold round tiles work very well for the floor as well. Great entry! Thanks rogueang. Excellent colors and textures, and a great story, nice job! Thank you Torgar! This build is so cool! Where is the purple from? Is it that new friends theme? I think it really stands out from the rest of the build, which can sometimes be difficult when building interiors. The "real" piece you see in the back is from an Indiana Jones set: http://www.bricklink.com/catalogItem.asp?S=7195-1 and the rug is a DUPLO cloth piece: http://www.bricklink.com/catalogItem.asp?P=blankie03pb02 Quote
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