[MOC] Nieson Dieono

[ShadowWolfHount]

Note: 2016 updated version, you can still see the old versions of her on the dA picture.

Here is the one of the Main Character of my story, Nieson Dieono the daughter of Sideo Dieono.

The bio is in here ->

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2014 version)

Please give me your Opinion and Criticism about the MOC and hope you like it.

Edited March 30, 2016 by ShadowWolfHount

[Chro]

While I'm still confused over the fact that she's human, this is a decent MOC. I suggest changing red axles to black, but the color scheme is fine otherwise (if the tan is skin - if it wasn't, I'd say you should distribute it more, such as on the legs). The use of the minifigure backpack as a coinpurse (?) is neat.

[Pate-keetongu]

Good work. Reminds me of this.

The filled eyes are nice, and I like the use of tubes on the torso.

I don't think more tan is needed, except probably on the head behind the mask. Tan Bionicle heads don't exist, but as the head isn't visible and It's supposed to be a human, a SYSTEM-based tan head could work.

The middle torso is probably a bit too thin if there's even an armor around the torso.

[ShadowWolfHount]

Thanks and Chro I don't think you know this but I am not making any Bionicle story anymore and I am making my own Story that is called Taran... or was you talking about the MOC.

Also pig how do Nieson remind you of Banjax selfMOC? And a custom system head would be good but I don't have a lot of tan aaaaaand that would be hell with all the other human MOCs.

[Pate-keetongu]

Also pig how do Nieson remind you of Banjax selfMOC? .

The styles have some things in common, including random SYSTEM bits and minifig bags as utility pouches, greebly outlook and so on.

[BuilderMax]

Its rather hard to think of this moc as a human. Mainly because in generally Bionicle builds are mechanical warriors. I also agree with Chro you should add more tan, besides that I think you should try make black be underneath silver while silver would seem like a knight armor.

[ShadowWolfHount]

Long time, me hardly getting on this site.

So last month I updated Nieson and gave some more color and details. I added the new pieces we gotten this year and the legs are now Ultrabuild bone pieces; which I tried to make it look like she is wearing brown boots.

So what do you guys think of this newly updated version of Nieson

[bidiminished]

The physique is quite good and I like how the cloths provide smooth contrast to stop her from looking greebly all over. The thighs and hip section look a bit too cluttered though.