James Wellington Posted January 25, 2015 Posted January 25, 2015 (edited) [soNE Freebuild] "The Meeting" Part. 2 Please comment, tell me what you think, it helps me to better perform next time. This is my fourth Episode. I think after 4 episodes, they can be judged? If these 4 episodes can be judged for points by a judge, I'd very much like them to be. INTRODUCTION: Captain Vars recently found out that one of the B-Squad members, Dan Jars, James's friend, was a Rebel spy. He now waits for Admiral Brickton to plot his plan to capture the traitor and get information from Dan. Meanwhile, James anxiously awaits Captain Vars to dock at the hanger, to tell him the growing Rebel movement on Coreillia. Star Destroyer "Tyrant", Brick System, 2 ABY. SONEe3s11 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Sergeant Trans: Welcome back, Sir! Captain Vars: Thank you, thank you all. Sergeant Trans: We trust your meeting went we- James: Excuse me, Sergeant. SONEe3s12 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Darek: Hey, watch it! James: Sorry to interrupt, Sir, but I received a transmission from Coreillia, the Imperial base there is being overrun by Rebels, Sir, we need to help them! SONEe3s13 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Captain Vars: James, Coreillia is far from here, we cannot just go and help them. I will alert ships nearby to send reinforcements, but we have orders to stay here until further notice. I'm confused as to why they even contacted us instead of a ship nearby. SONEe3s14 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Captain Vars: I will contact Star Destroyers Trandirum and Crusher to go and help the base on Coreillia. I thank you for telling me, James. We need more capable troopers like you. James: Alright, sir. Thanks, I guess. But what about the *lowers voice* secret mission, Sir? Captain Vars: Uh.. We will do a few more briefings on it. I will get you all together when the time comes to do them. SONEe3s15 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Captain Vars: Now, if you'll excuse me, I have some work to do. As you were, B-Squad. Officers, get to your stations. *Later on* SONEe3s16 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr *Boom-Beep Boom-Beep* Captain Vars: Ah, hello, Sir. Admiral Brickton (via hologram): Hello, Captain. We are almost ready to take the spy into custody. Right after, you will inform B-Squad and any high ranking officers of what happened. I know some if not all of B-Squad will not take this easily. Captain Vars: Yes, Sir. Contact me when you're ready. Admiral Brickton: Excellent, I will also see to it personally that the Rebel is apprehended. I will come aboard shortly after I contact you. I will bring some troopers to detain him, and to transport him to the station. You may continue with any other plans you have after that, Captain. Captain Vars: *Sigh* Very well, Sir. Contact me when it's time. SONEe3s17 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Admiral Brickton: Soon, the Rebel Scum will learn not to spy on the mighty Galactic Empire. Soon, my plan to catch all of their pathetic spies will be engaged. And we will find them all. That will be all Captain. See what happens next in Episode 5! Please comment, and tell me what you thought! Edited January 25, 2015 by James Wellington Quote
Lord Tyrus Posted January 27, 2015 Posted January 27, 2015 Nice story, I like the tight corridors, really emphasises the military feel. Quote
MontyPython Posted January 27, 2015 Posted January 27, 2015 Nice story, looking forward to see more! Quote
James Wellington Posted January 28, 2015 Author Posted January 28, 2015 Glad you guys liked It. More episodes on the way. Quote
LEGO Train 12 Volts Posted January 28, 2015 Posted January 28, 2015 Lovely episodes I want to see how the story goes on! Quote
James Wellington Posted January 28, 2015 Author Posted January 28, 2015 Lovely episodes I want to see how the story goes on! Glad to hear. More coming soon! Make sure to look at the episodes after this, too! Quote
MKJoshA Posted January 28, 2015 Posted January 28, 2015 Great story! As you are only allowed to get XP for 4 freebuilds per episode, and as this build re-uses things from your previous builds, I would recommend not counting this one as an XP freebuild. What do you say? Quote
James Wellington Posted January 28, 2015 Author Posted January 28, 2015 (edited) I say this one should be for XP. ☺ Edited January 28, 2015 by James Wellington Quote
MKJoshA Posted January 28, 2015 Posted January 28, 2015 Ok, so out of these 6, which do you want judged as a freebuild? Beginning Factor Transmissions The Meeting Part 1 The Meeting Part 2 The Escape Part 1 The Escape Part 2 2XP Quote
James Wellington Posted January 29, 2015 Author Posted January 29, 2015 Transmissions, The Meeting Part One and Two, The Escape Part One. Even though this one has mostly the same things, so do most of the freebuilds, and this one among the others that I picked I think will do well Quote
Shadows of Nar Eurbrikka Posted February 7, 2015 Posted February 7, 2015 Judges have awarded you 2 XP! Quote
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.