[SoNE Freebuild] Last firing exercise

[markus1984]

Short Review of the story

PartI "Join the Empire by markus1984

PartII "Recruitmant by Disco86

PartIII "Swearing in" by markus1984

PartIV "Recruitment" by Disco86

third freebuild "Last firing exercise" sector 32

The two wonder though what it all is because they have just completed their month-long training!

But whatever!

cu @the Endor Mission!

on flickr you found the complete Album.

markus

[emilstorm]

That's a nice little shooting range :) I like the damage on the back wall, there are some lousy shots among those storm troopers :)

[Lord Tyrus]

That's a nice little shooting range :) I like the damage on the back wall, there are some lousy shots among those storm troopers :)

Well that's not unusual!

Great MOC, Markus, the blasted wall looks really effective!

Edited May 21, 2014 by Lord Tyrus

[MstrOfPppts]

Cool and huge thing! One thing I'd sugest is to use a two bricks thick wall, so that the light is not seen through where the 1x1 round plates are used. I doubt they shot through the cruiser armour ...

[Ninja Nin]

That's a nice little shooting range :) I like the damage on the back wall, there are some lousy shots among those storm troopers :)

Only Imperial stormtroopers are so precise.

[Csacsa234]

Wow, you've done a great job again, everything is spot on, it has a really imperialy feeling:D And I like the holes and damages by the missed shots. Congratulations!

Only Imperial stormtroopers are so precise.

so true

[Nom Carver]

I am glad you are on our side, i say that because of your shooting skills, nothing else .

Edited May 22, 2014 by Nom Carver

[theman4090]

That's a nice little shooting range :) I like the damage on the back wall, they are all lousy shots among storm troopers :)

Fixed that for you

Edited May 22, 2014 by theman4090

[Lobot]

Yet another top-notch MOC markus, I don't know how you construct them so quickly! The lighting is perfect, and really adds to it.

[MKJoshA]

I love the firing range concept!

[Disco86]

Another great part of the series. You really making each part of the story better than the one before. Hopefully I can top that with my upcoming freebuild. Like who the story slowly develops, and especially because of the building skill.

[BEAVeR]

My my... at this rate, who knows where this new saga will end up! Because every new installment makes me more and more excited!

Becuse look at this: what a beautiful build. The damage to the wall is of course great. As always I'm a big fan of those sweetly decorated pillars accentuating the height of the hangar. Also, the layout of the greebles is really good, and it forms a nice contrast with the smoothness of e.g. the floor.The obligatory white lines are there, but you placed those crates just right to break it up a bit. I also like the orderly chaos of the troopers lining up for their practice. And the details like all the holders for the blasters are perfectly in place. Finally, those targets are brilliant and I like how every one has its own base.

No matter how much I like this MOC, I still spot some details that could use some improvement. It's great that your greebles are more or less consistent, but maybe avoid repeating them. Seeing the same pattern repeated in each column doesn't contribute to the randomness of greebles. Just rearranging the present pieces in a slightly different configuration would give it a more realistic feeling, because now it looks like all those columns could just as well be combined and still have the same function... Also, still watch a bit out with those crates. Cluster them some more, so that people can more easily pass. And that stacked configuration in the back doesn't look very stable to me...One final remark is that the targets maybe are a little bit too close to form a good practice, but these are rookies after all...

So this build is nearly perfect, and I really hope the saga continues with more of this goodness!

[markus1984]

And here i can also say many, many thanks for the stunning feedback and the tips!

Thanks Lobot for blogging the MOC/story.

cya

markus

[LEGO Train 12 Volts]

Beautiful shining floor!

Awesome blue filter color

[Shadows of Nar Eurbrikka]

Judges have awarded you 5 XP! Your character's stats will be updated shortly.

[markus1984]

Thanks for the feedback and for this 5 points again .

markus