EpsilonEta Posted July 19, 2015 Posted July 19, 2015 (edited) Location: A06 – Guinevere Tags: Spying, Military, Building The story continue right after “Dust Demon base” so the first room is the same and should not be judged. Previously: Agent Raven has been sent to deal with the increasingly annoying Dust Demons. She infiltrate the organization and discover there is a traitor within Kawashita who supply the demons with information. She manage to slip this intel to agent Koro hoping he can find and stop the traitor. Now she's been invited to the Dust Demons main base on Guinevere to meet with there leader, the Commodore. All she need to do then is to call a Kawashita base on Guinevere and it will be the end of the Dust Demons. Minor setback It's an honor to meet you. The honor is mine, they say you are a military genius. Raven notice a slight disappointment in the Comodores face but makes no hint that she noticed. Well that's an overstatement but I have a few talents. One of them is to notice a traitor when I see one. Oh, that's a useful talent. More disappointment from the Comodore who make a signal to the guards. Wish I could spot... Hey! Let go! What are you doing! We know who you are. What? Take her to the interrogation room Wait! There must have been a mistake! Really, who do you think I am? I'm on your side! Shut up and get in. What is your name? I told you, I'm Sarah Connor. Lies! What's your real name!? You have my file, my name is Sarah Jeanette Connor! Your ID was faked! You are a Kawashita spy. What!? No! Why Did you come here? You called me her. I was... Why did you join the Demons?! I was bored. There is no action in the Milkyway. This was the coolest... Lies! Send in our “interrogation officer”. We got a stubborn one. Loosen her up a bit. I'll be back in an hour. No! It's been a mistake! I'm not a spy! Don't leave me here! Aww! Noo! AAAAA *door closes* AAA! NO!! I DON'T KNOW ANYTHING! AAAHH... After a while, the Commodore comes back. Not even 15 minutes, Raven thinks. Maybe an inexperienced person would have mistaken it for an hour or he's just inpatient. So, are you ready to talk? I have talked from... What's your name!!? It's Sarah! Give me another name or get another hour with him! Ok ok, I'm Sarah... er Kerrigan? You brought this on yourself. Whait! I... I am a Kawashita spy. Good. So, what are they planing to do to us? I don't know. Kill you? I'll be back in an hour. No, wait! I can be an Mantis soldier... Or an Octan lowyer... Anything! No! Stop! AAAAA *door closes* To be continued tomorrow (or maybe the day after). here is the next part I decided to split this up because the story got a bit long and I ran out of time. I don't expect mush points for this "half" build. I would also like to note that my story is somewhat “realistic”. Had it been an action movie Raven would have killed all three guards, arrested the Commodore and used his communication desk to call for backup, securing the entire base. Done. But in my world you can't defeat three guards and an armed leader (in that case they would have brought more guards). She have won some simular battles previously but then she had the element of surprise and weapons. The entire build (I just notised the layout resemble an Octan prison but with an interigation room instead of a londry room) Edited July 22, 2015 by EpsilonEta Quote
Commander Turtle Posted July 19, 2015 Posted July 19, 2015 I like how your story is progressing, I'm curious to see what you've got planned with this. I think the interrogation room is also justified in having little detail, since it's not exactly a place where people stick posters up. Quote
shmails Posted July 19, 2015 Posted July 19, 2015 Great story, and who doesn't love a cliff hanger! Quote
LittleJohn Posted July 19, 2015 Posted July 19, 2015 Cool build! I like the door to the interrogation room Quote
Mike S Posted July 20, 2015 Posted July 20, 2015 Nice presentation of your story! The build looks good and I like how you designed the door to the interrogation room! Quote
mccoyed Posted July 20, 2015 Posted July 20, 2015 I like the way Raven behaves under pressure hahahaha. Quote
EpsilonEta Posted July 20, 2015 Author Posted July 20, 2015 I like the way Raven behaves under pressure hahahaha. Well, tecnicaly it's "Sarah" under pressure but you'll see in part two. Quote
Big Sal Posted July 20, 2015 Posted July 20, 2015 Really nice presentation and story! The build is great, especially the interrogation room's door! Quote
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