(SoNE) Don't Look Down

[CMP]

[Datalog:]

[Datalog: 0000064//Designation: TK-671//: Assignment: Inspect Integrity Strut 394]

Back on the ice cube. Last assignment....did not go well. There was a spice freighter, and a power malfunction, and I...may not have been paying attention to the viewscreen, but come on, the peripheral vision in this mask sucks, I probably wouldn't've been able to see it anyway.

So now I'm supposed to wander out into the frozen wastes to check on a single stupid integrity strut. Why the hell are we even trying to build stuff here? There's snowstorms every other day, integrity or not.

[Datalog: 0000067//Designation: TK-671//: Assignment: Inspect Integrity Strut 394]

Okay. So I'm in a little bit of a fix here.

I was leaving camp for the day after dinner when I realized: I left my favorite cup behind! I mean, without that, I'd be dead out here! That thing meant everything to me!!

Oh, and I left my blaster too, so I thought I'd pick that up.

Anyway...there was a grapnel malfunction - entirely coincidental and the fault of nobody - and I'm kind of stuck here. I can still reach my data recorder, though my comlink...well, slipped. It's alright, though, as long as I can keep up a constant stream of recording, they'll be able to locate me once I don't show up back at base.

Actually, I think if I twist just a little bit, I can re

[Datalog ERROR, CRITICAL DAMAGE SUSTAINED]

I'd like this judged.

Mostly I just wanted to see if I could improve on the windswept snow technique I used in Daily Maintenance and do some rockwork. Most of my builds are going to be land-based, I can promise you that much. I'm pretty pleased with how the verticality of the build came out. SNOT is awesome.

[MstrOfPppts]

Nice SNOT usage, but I'd suggest to cover all the studs when doing rocks. Also what is the technic piece supposed to be? If it's a part of structure, it'd be better to make it light gray to make different than rocks. The smooth snow always looks nice.

[CMP]

Nice SNOT usage, but I'd suggest to cover all the studs when doing rocks. Also what is the technic piece supposed to be? If it's a part of structure, it'd be better to make it light gray to make different than rocks. The smooth snow always looks nice.

Didn't have enough tiles (and plates; if I just tiled it over now, the slopes would sink awkwardly into the cliffside itself) and the technic piece is the integrity strut mentioned. Mostly it's to keep stuff from collapsing. I would've made it light gray if I could've.

[Nom Carver]

You really got into some trouble out there don't you? it seems that is not easy to be a snowtrooper.

[Wedge09]

Really nice work :thumbup: I like in particulat the story, very funny

[LegoFjotten]

Nice build, and funny!

It would look even better if it was a bit smoother.

[Brickdoctor]

Your rock and snow work is getting better, and the writing is great as always. Like MstrOfPppts said, that 6x4 area in the middle of the rocks looks a little out of place, but instead of tiling it; I'd just add in some cheese slopes or something to give it more texture without making it too flat and smooth.

[Shadows of Nar Eurbrikka]

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