markus1984 Posted August 21, 2014 Posted August 21, 2014 (edited) Hello Fans from SoNE Disco has already presented his excellent vignettes (see under "Story so far") and here are all my entrys for this challenge with the complete Story! To understand the buildings is actually only briefly to say that I've practically built the prehistory to Disco`s MOC`s. The Story so far..... PartI - "Join the Empire" by markus1984 PartII - "Recruitment" by Disco86 PartIII - "Swearing in" by markus1984 PartIV - "Foreign System" by Disco86 PartV - "Last firing exercise- Sector32" by markus1984 PartVI - "Invasion preparation" by Disco86 PartVII - Challenge EPV - "The Invasion begins" by markus1984 PartVIII - Challenge EPV - "Endor Construction site" by Disco86 PartIX- "Mission Endor complete" by markus1984 PartX - "Back from Endor" by markus1984 PartXI - Challenge EPVI - "Searching in the Outer Rim" by Disco86 SoNE - Challenge EPVI - "Searching in the Outer Rim - prehistroy" Our two protagonists recieved a new objective. They should try to find Boba Fett and give him a notice from Darth Vader, because he wants to thank Boba for his nearly successful work so far. The mission sheet describes Boba's route nearly exact, but will he really be anywhere out there ? How to find somebody, who does not want to be found ? The first planet on the mission sheet was Fondor, so Markus and Paul travelled down there. That should be the bar where Boba always stays if he is on this planet. In a bar, we're always right . Since we can equal a drink when we are already there. I'd also prefer to make, but we better try to find Boba quickly as possible so that these woes mission is finally completed. Yes sir - if you say so Yeah, come on, relaxe some time, we look purely and hope that we get about where we find him. There was no evidence that Boba was in the bar last time! The staff were just not too talkative and have sent out empty handed us again basically. Thus, the two went down the road, hoping to get one or the other info. "Now comes Discos Part" How the hell you want here in this pile of garbage at all what or who find ?!No sooner landed, we are already on the precipice of a dead end! Yes, it seems as though here the complete galaxy dumped their garbage! AND the stench - Disgusting! I'll stay here certainly not for long! Let's go in the other direction, from here it looks as if there are a few huts "if one can call it that" are. Hardly already landed motivated any longer on this planet searching for someone! Especially when here who would hide, they would never find him! After a short walk through the cluttered terrain, the two were in a kind of shantytown. "Now comes discos Part" Great, from the junkyard to the jungle! Where you get the feeling that at any second something like an ugly plant snaps at me to devour me. Because you're right! Plenty to keep me here not lay, above all, we will surely find nothing on this planet! We are but one historical place! Here were fighting the Clone Wars instead! Yes, those were the days. Since at least important battles were still fought. Not like now where you have to stifle NEN small rebel resistance in the bud. Look, really impressive .... An AT-TE, or rather what is left of it still! Thus, the two continue to fight through something unpleasant jungle of Felucia. Looked more like a journey through bygone days with all the remnants of the former battles. "Now comes discos Part" Last stop of the recorded trajectory of Boba Fett. Already a worth seeing Planet, water as far as the eye can see and right in the middle exuberates the city Mon Calamari out! Yeah, enough sightseeing, watch dear about it ... here come two such types calamari. A nice reception is here. Welcome to Mon Calamari, what can I do for you? Short Sharp said - we are looking for Boba Fett and have heard that he is in your town. Yes, he could still be here! My helper will bring you into the neighborhood where he was last seen. Thank you for your quick help! The Empire will reciprocate with you. Well you are to me a bottle! We are then again the morons what this may bring "times of gratitude", but the main thing we slowly get to our goal. After the small conversation on the landing platform, they were taken by a speed boat to the area where Boba Fett was last seen. "Now comes discos Part" So, that's it for now :). Hope you enjoyed our story and all the photos flickr. Many thanks for reading the Story! cya Markus Montari PS: Hahhaha, SO SORRY for the very, very bad english! But so long articles i can only make with the Google translater and this is not the best :grin: Edited August 21, 2014 by markus1984 Quote
MstrOfPppts Posted August 21, 2014 Posted August 21, 2014 Haha, this really gave me a laugh. I knew it was Google translate all along. You Germans have such a funny word order in the sentences, It's sometimes hard to understand the translation. I think you should get this translated by someone who speaks both languages, there's plenty on this forum that might be willing to help. But anyway I greet your effort to write so much althoguh your english isn't that well. All the creations are gorgeus, I'll comment on each later. I really like your consistency with Disco's creations, keeping the same base and a nice story flow. Now get him to do some freebuilds to gain 50XP and you can both add the Search on Bothawui!!! Quote
markus1984 Posted August 21, 2014 Author Posted August 21, 2014 (edited) Ahhhhh, shame on me . @MstrOfPppts Yeah, the easy storys are no problem to write it in english but so long storys.... that takes so many time in claim and i doesn`t have it at the moment. I only hope that you/the others can follow the story? Really? But i have the points after the evaluation of the MOC`s?! markus Edited August 21, 2014 by markus1984 Quote
Sir Brickalot Posted August 22, 2014 Posted August 22, 2014 I love the Search on Felucia, especially the clone trooper helmet in the foilage! I also really like the Search on Ord Mantell because of all those details. Great job markus1984, keep it up! Quote
markus1984 Posted August 26, 2014 Author Posted August 26, 2014 Thanks! And also a big THANK to beaver for help me to translate the story in "correctly english" (now i must only copy the text the next days). markus Quote
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