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I actually really like the roof. We see snow covered roofs like that in Utah all the time. I might have to steal your idea. I also really like your descriptions of each scene.

What a great use of BURPs! It's almost an imperceptible transition from BURP to brick. Great job! I would work on clearing up your photography a little. It looks like you might have too much sunlight.

Can't wait to hear who won!

Initially, I really like this. Your use of angled plates works really well. I like your method. Could you add some more pictures of close-ups? Also, what kind of camera are you using? Your pictures seem a little blurry. If you use a tripod and change the ISO settings it might help.

That'll be fairly easy to add. Are there any other specific regions people would like added?

Everything here is awesome, but my favorite part is the arched tunnel through the wall. Beautiful!

Yes, Vitruvius

Thanks for putting so much thought into this in such a short time. Let me address each thing one by one. First: I talked a lot with the SoNE leaders before posting this. While we are currently still only allowed to build on certain planets, that rule might be changed. Even if it isn't, the bios give each builder a broader idea of the Star Wars universe. Though, my idea of fleshing out certain planets will have to change if that's the case Second: The map is supposed to be simple. I studied a bunch of official maps as I worked on this and they were, for the most part, extremely complex. A simple map allows those not familiar with the SW universe to get a broad overview quickly without having to wade through lots of details that may not be important to them. I intended to add to the map as needed so please let me know if there is something missing you would like to see. Third: All of the information comes straight from the sources I cited. While it is not copy-and-pasted word for word, none of the information is my own. I simply modified the information and in some casings used the exacting wording for certain sentences. Fourth: I included all the information I though may be relevant. Since I only consulted myself on what I thought would be relevant, I'm not surprised that some of it doesn't seem useful. May I ask though, which parts do you find irrelevant? Fifth: Wookiepedia is probably a better source for the tables you asked for. I included information on the terrain for each planet. If someone wants to go more in depth there are more comprehensive guides out there. This is only meant to get the imagination juices flowing for MOCs, it's not meant to be a comprehensive guide. Sixth: I mentioned that Mon Cala is one of the names for the planet in the bio. There are many different views on what the planet should properly be called. I picked the one that's been around the longest. Seventh: I included the source information at the end of each planet's bio because the sources changed for each. And I don't think the forum allows for foot notes

I just got those planet bios up that I had talked about a couple pages back. I'm also created my own SW map for our use. Let me know if you want anything added.

I just posted my map and planet bios. Let me know if you want anything added. HERE

You can find out more about Sullust here.

I love the SNOT wall! Perfect feel to it!

UPDATE! After working with the creator of swgalaxymap.com, I have created a jpeg snapshot of his amazing map. We have been given permission to use if for SoNE. I plan to add more planets in the future, but for now you can get used to seeing the universe in more detail! And, if you want to find a specific planet, just go to the map website and find it there. The grid matches between the two maps. The old map is in the spoiler: ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Bothawui - Located in the Mid Rim, Bothawui has three moons and is home to the Bothan species. This cosmopolitan planet has a temperate climate and its terrain consists of mountains and ridges separated by deep, wide valleys inhabited by dangerous wildlife, as well as plains, forests, and urban areas. While Bothawui is famous as a major hub for information trafficking, it also has industrial centers, grain farms, and mines. There are many different styles of buildings on Bothawui, but it’s largest population centers are known for their stone towers. While officially a part of the Empire during the Galactic Civil War, the Imperials maintained little presence on the planet. A figure-head governor and a small contingent of stormtroopers was the only outward sign that the world was under supposedly Imperial governorship. Both the Imperial and Rebel Alliance intelligence services apparently decided to let the planet serve as neutral ground, where they could both spy on one another with no open conflict. (Taken from http://starwars.wiki...m/wiki/Bothawui and Star Wars - The Essential Atlas) Commenor - Located just outside of the Core Worlds, Commenor has two moons. It is a major trading outpost and spaceport and is known for its high status and wealth. The University of Commenor is most notable point of interest though the planet does also have many notable cities, mountains, oceans, deserts, and canyons. During the beginning of the Galactic Civil War the planet was under control of a private Imperial Citizen, Dunkler Klerus. (Taken from http://starwars.wiki...m/wiki/Commenor and http://holocron.swco...tle_of_Commenor) Corellia - One of the Core World plantes, Corellia has three moons and is home to humans, Selonians, and Dralls. It is the capital planet of the Corellian system, which also includeds Selonia, Drall, Tralus, and Talus. Collectively, the planets of the system were known as the Five Brothers. As the largest planet and the closest to Corell, Corellia is often called the "Eldest Brother" or the "Eldest." Corellia's surface is extremely temperate, dominated by rolling, thick forests, lush farmland, crystal swamps, golden beaches, and large seas. Snow-covered mountains dominate part of the landscape and it is rumored that there are many deep underwater caverns. There is also a tunnel system developed by the Selonians that runs under most of the planet. Coellia remains largely rural and undeveloped, with small villages and farming communities comprising the bulk of urban development. This is due to its main industry being its massive orbital shipyards. The largest cities are Coronet—the planetary capital, the tourist haven of Kor Vella, the double-city Tyrena, and the mountain hamlets of Doaba Guerfel and Bela Vistal. With the declaration of the New Order, Diktat Dupas Thomree made a deal with Palpatine: Thomree could govern Corellian Sector as he wished (mostly free of Imperial mandates) as long as he paid taxes, war matériel, and homage to the Emperor. Diktat Dupas Thomree died in 2 BBY. He was replaced by Daclif Gallamby whom was little more than a puppet of the Imperial Governor. Although officially under Imperial control Corellia kept its own security force known as Corellian Security Force or CorSec for short. CorSec became famous for its rigid adherence to law and order in part because of Corellia’s equally famous smugglers like Han Solo. Following the abandonment of Massassi Station, the Rebel Alliance established a base on Corellia in 1 ABY before moving on to Hoth. (Taken from http://starwars.wiki...m/wiki/Corellia and Star Wars - The Essential Atlas) Dantooine - Located in the Raioballo sector of the Outer Rim, Dantooine has two moons and is home to the primitive Dantari race though its sentient population consisted primarily of simple Human farmers. A pleasant olive, blue, brown, and purple colored world of grasslands, savannahs, rivers and lakes, Dantooine hosts a small population spread amongst single-family settlements and small communities with large land holdings. Dantooine has several continents. There is an equatorial one that is connected to a larger northern one and a south polar one by slender land bridges, as well as a disconnected north-eastern continent. It is remote from the bustle of the galactic trade routes and the few colonists who live there maintain individual family estates largely isolated from each other. Some of the local fauna consists of spiky blba trees and ocher plains. (Taken from http://starwars.wiki.../wiki/Dantooine and Star Wars - The Essential Atlas) Felucia - Located in the Outer Rim Territories, Felucia has two moons and is home to the tribal Felucians. A largely unsettled terrestrial jungle planet it has a hot and humid atmosphere and significant water resources beneath a surface irradiated by ultraviolet light. The planet’s surface has an almost hallucinogenic quality. The larger-than-life flora is gooily translucent and saturated with every rainbow hue in the visible spectrum. Felucia has a diversity of bizarre plants, fungi, and animals which were almost rubber-like and translucent. When the sun shines, the environment glitters like multicolored glass. Most of Felucia is entirely covered by a humid, fetid landscape of huge fungal forests including phosphorescent lichens, explosive spore shooters, toxic puffballs, and carnivorous blossoms. Felucia’s animals are even odder, often compoased of a see-through, boneless musculature that makes them resemble dollops of gelatin including native gelagrubs, immigrated acklays, and a prodigious sarlacc. Felucia would not support large-scale colonies and any new arrivals established hard-fought, scattered settlements on the surface. These small settlements eventually developed into commercially administered cities like Kway Teow, Har Gau, Jiaozi, and Niango, pushing the native jungle-dwelling Felucians to retreat into the wilderness. Some native Felucians utilized subterranean caverns while others socialized in farming communities based around Nysillin crop. Although the Empire later maintained a presence on the planet through the Galactic Civil War, Felucia became heavily trafficked by crime syndicates. (Taken from http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Felucia and Star Wars - The Essential Atlas) Fondor - Located in the Freeworlds portion of Tapani sector, Fondor has six moons and is home to the Fondorians who were baseline Human, but with no hair and purple blood. Fondor itself was completely industrialized eons ago, and its surface scabbed with excavations, factories, cooling towers, steam tunnels, and offices. The planet also housed hectares of laborers' barracks for the dockworkers whose jobs were overhead in the shipyards. However, most of the surface factories are autonomous, controlled by great droid brains and billions of worker droids. The capital city is Fondor City. Fondor is famous throughout the galaxy for its extensive orbital shipyards and spacedocks, outclassed only by those at Corellia and Kuat. The Fondor Shipyards were associated with the Techno Union prior to the Clone Wars, and were sufficiently vast to construct the Executor, Darth Vader's Executor-class Star Dreadnought. (Taken from http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Fondor and Star Wars - The Essential Atlas) Hapes - Located in a nebula known as the Transitory Mists, Hapes is the capital of the isolationist, female-ruled Hapes Cluster and is home to the Hapans, a near human race. It is also the administrative capital of the Hapes Consortium. It is a beautiful world of lush forests, soaring mountain ranges, and impeccably clean cities and factories. Hunting is strictly regulated by the Queen Mother, as is Hapes’s robust fishing industry. Much of the surface was untouched due to the Hapan love of beauty, with Hapans preferring to stay in one of the few small, neat cities located on the planet’s surface, or Ta'a Chume'Dan, the capital city of Hapes. The Hapans were ruled by the Queen Mother. The title of Queen Mother was hereditary, passed down from mother to daughter. If the Queen Mother failed to have daughters, the wife of the firstborn son became Queen Mother. However, to be in the line of succession meant both the Queen Mother and her heirs had to avoid constant attempts on their lives by jealous relatives who vied for the throne themselves. In addition to the Queen Mother, there were also representatives from each Consortium member planet at the Hapan Royal Court. Their main purpose was to vote on matters of importance and to give updates on any political and social conditions of their home planets that may require the Queen Mother's attention. The Queen Mother had the final say on everything, and her word was considered law. Hapan culture, at least among the upper classes, was based on assassination attempts and struggles for power. Most members of Hapan nobility or royalty would think nothing of manipulating and/or arranging the death of one of their own if it would advance their own cause. Due to the matriarchal society of the Hapes Consortium, men were often treated as second class citizens. Hapan males were used mainly for breeding and thought of as little more than an accessory. The Hapan people had a deep (some would say neurotically so) love of beauty. If a person, especially the heir to the throne, was blemished or deformed in any way, it was considered a fate worse than death. Surrounded by shimmering nebulae, and with seven moons in the sky after sunset, Hapes never knew the darkness of true night, and the Hapan people had relatively poor night-vision. Hapes, via the Consortium, was vastly wealthy, with treasures such as rainbow gems and guns of command fetching high prices on both legal and illegal markets. Even though businesses could operate on any of the 63 member planets of the Hapes Consortium, Hapan law dictates that all major financial and business transactions must be conducted at Ta'a Chume'Dan, the capital city of Hapes. (Taken from http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Hapes and Star Wars - The Essential Atlas) Kuat - Located in the Core Worlds, Kuat has two moons and is home to a mostly human population. It is a terraformed planet of forests and plains. Early in its history rule of the planet fell to the Ten, a consortium of the richest merchant families. The Ten were the ones who terraformed Kuat’s surface into terraced parkland and built the orbital rings that give the system some of its fame. It is best known as the home of Kuat Drive Yards. These famous shipyards, used to build ships for both the Galactic Republic and later the Galactic Empire, circled the planet for thousands of kilometers. The Kuati have a matriarchal society with four castes: the elite aristocracy; the wealthy middle class; the (native) working class; and the lowly off-world laborers. These divisions led to peculiar bredding quirks including the telbun – a physically perfect male specimen offered by a merchant family to the father the offspring of a female aristocrat, yet possessing none of the rights of the father. (Taken from http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Kuat and Star Wars - The Essential Atlas) Mon Calamari / Dac - Located in the Outer Rim, the aquatic planet Mon Calamari has one moon and is home to a wealth of sentient species: the Mon Calamari, the Quarren, the Moappa, the Amphi-Hydrus, and the Whaladons. The native species referr to the planet as Dac while the non-indigenous refer to it as Mon Calamari or Mon Cala. The oceans of Mon Calamari contain a massive biodiversity of aquatic creatures. Only island chains break the surface of the shallow oceans, with most of the 27.5 billion inhabitants living in floating megalopolises or pressurized bases on the seafloor. The planet is surrounded by the impressive Mon Calamari Shipyards. (Taken from http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Dac and Star Wars - The Essential Atlas) Sullust - Sullust is located in the Outer Rim Territories. It is the homeworld of the Sullustans and headquarters of the galaxy-spanning SoroSuub Corporation. All of Sullust is composed of multicolored rock, veined by lava channels. The world is volatile with hundreds of active volcanoes, producing a noxious, toxic atmosphere and intense electrical storms. These conditions, combined with the planet's rich mineral deposits, cause the native Sullustan inhabitants to live in underground caves. The underground caves are humid and cool, with a diverse biosphere supported by underground lakes. The planet was once known for its podraces. (Taken from http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Sullust and Star Wars - The Essential Atlas) Ord Mantell - Located in the Bright Jewel Cluster in the Mid Rim, Ord Mantell has two large moons and thirteen other satellites orbiting the planet. This collection of natural wonders made Ord Mantell something of a tourist attraction, despite its seedier side. It was also the homeworld of the Mantellian Savrips and Mantellian flutterplumes, whose sentience was largely unnoticed or ignored. Mountains and islands are the distinct features of Ord Mantell's terrain. Almost every land mass on the planet is dotted with mountain chains. Its population is clustered on the arid equatorial continents amid low mesas and flat plains. Coastal cities, including the capital Worlport, are glittering baubles that entice visitors to drop their money at casino tables. The urban outskirts are far less glamorous, with junkyards that stretch for hundreds of kilometers and strip mines that gush oily smoke. Ord Mantell's continent boasts a sprawl of cities along its southern shore and it is this part of Ord Mantell that many spacers regarded as a safeport, famous for casinos and for tourists, of which it attracted almost one billion annually. Other metropolitan areas lacked address markings and were considered not intended for outsiders. The thinking behind this was that if you don't know where you're going, then you don't belong here. Outside of the urban sprawl, the narrow equatorial band of starports and the volcanic islands, Ord Mantell remained largely rural and low tech. Its extreme reliance on fossil fuels kept the planet quite barren, huge robotic coal yards remained to fuel the planet's cities and an immense junkyard littered a large portion of the planetscape Ord Mantell lost its strategic significance over time due to the expansion of new trade routes, but the presence of military-quality starship yards and docks brought a thriving civilian cargo trade to the world. Eventually it became a haven for mercenaries, exiles, murderers and smugglers. Ord Mantell’s non-native population comprises a true melting pot, with Rodians, Rybets, Devaronians, Arconans, humans, and a thousand other species intermingling, and no group numbering more than five percent of the population. (Taken from http://starwars.wiki...iki/Ord_Mantell and Star Wars - The Essential Atlas) Ring of Kafrene – Located in the galaxy's Expansion Region between Takodana and the Corellian Trade Spine, the Ring of Kafrene is an asteroid belt in which a great mining colony was constructed in the days of the Old Republic. During the civil war, it is controlled by the Galactic Empire and home to a great number of different beings, looking to make a living under difficult circumstances. The Empire's grip around the system is tight, but the sheer amount of ragtag individuals crowding the streets of the colony makes it hard for authorities to keep a close eye on shady business being conducted in the back alleys. One can stumble upon a lot of useful information in this colony if asking the right questions – and quickly be silenced if asking the wrong ones. (Taken from http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Ring_of_Kafrene, http://www.swgalaxymap.com/ and Rogue One: A Star Wars Story ) Eadu - It has stormy weather conditions and is home to the Imperial Kyber Refinery. Perhaps the planet's natural resources offer kyber crystals as well? Wobani - Imperial prisoners are brought here and it looks like it uses old war gear from the clone wars as well, allowing players to mix PT-styled builds into their creations for this planet. It practically begs to display imprisonment, escape and rescue scenarios going on between Imperials and Rebels. Scarif - After the utter annihilation of the Imperial data archives and the planetary shields were destroyed, the Empire probably gave up on the planet, military-wise and had their fleet move out from the sector, which makes this even battle ground for both parties. Even though a part of the planet's surface has been devastated, the rest is still intact and probably inhabited. Jedha - I think there's enough evidence to speculate things go on outside the city from Saw's whole underground network. The alliance regarded him and his forces as a terrorist army. Who knows, what or who else is outside that city? Tunnel Networks, smugglers, Guavian Death Gang, Kanjiklub? It is the imagination's limit until more (if any) source material comes out. Lah'mu - This was covered a little bit in the book prequel too. Though barren, you did draw the parallel to Tatooine. Plus Again, Saw had something to do with picking the location. Could be more rebels in hiding. Personally, I found the planet fascinating.

Love it! Microbuilds are not my strong point so I love it when others pull it off well.

I second the request for the HoM deadline extenstion. It's causing me to have to wait to on any other builds (like a boat).

It's funny what drinking sea-water will do to your imagination. I heard it told from many sailors that these particular Sea Elves had faced a tragic storm and had been shipwrecked at sea for weeks. A lone survivor drank sea-water to stay alive and came back with this horrible tale. As his brain was addled by the sea-water no sane person would believe his outrageous tale. I guess Kaliphlinites are more gullible.

I really like the changes you made and seeing a larger view pictures is great. Good job!

Thanks everyone! Your kind comments are a real encouragement to me to continue on . I'm really glad you all are enjoying the story so far, I know I am @DrC: It's made up of the sails from the Ninjago set, Destiny's Bounty. I have them upside down and overlapping to create the canopy.

Amazing work on the sides of those wagons! Are they just being held by gravity?

I've been thinking about trying to trade off some of my flesh heads and hands as well. If anyone else wants to trade for some of my fleshies you can message me. And Simon, I'll be shooting you a message in the next few days just in case dG's aren't enough for you.

Gorgeous. I love it. I'm going to have to use some of these building techniques.

My last freebuild in Kaliphlin (at least the last one I have planned) before my story moves to Avalonia: An Excuse For Dialogue

OoC: Before you go any further, let me warn you. There is a lot of writing included in this post. This build became the perfect opportunity for me to bring some story lines together that have been tumbling around in my mind; and it resulted in a lot of dialogue and story telling. I'm afraid you won't find this post very interesting if you are just looking for some cool MOCs. So, let me suggestion that you save looking through this until you have the time or desire to read and look at the same time. I don't pretend to be the greatest story teller out there, but I hope that my story has been and will be at least interesting to read. Without further ado: An Excuse For Dialogue See the previous tales: Wyndor's Saga Chapter 1 Part 1: A Tragic Beginning Part 2: A Rude Awakening Part 2.1: Liam's Shop Part 2.2: Upward Trek Part 2.3: Misty Fight Part 2.4: Arrow Training Part 3 Intro: An Evil Plot Part 3: A Timely Friend Part 4: For Whom the Bells Toll Part 5: Small Help Part 6: The Map Maker “Well Gex’s map says this is the place,” said Natolyth, “sure doesn’t look like much though.” They were staring at a sand dune. “Give that map hither!” said Wyndor. “Well look here, we made a wrong turn at that last sand dune! I swear, the only thing in Kaliphlin is sand!” They soon retraced their steps and ended up at the right sand dune. As they approached they heard shouts, cheers, and the sound of weapons clashing. “Now this seems like the fighting pits Chalin is rumored to be champion of.” said Wyndor. “Just because I misdirected us that one time during All Hallow’s Eve doesn’t mean I’m going to misread the map every time Wyndor.” replied Natolyth in a huff. They worked their way through the crowd to get as close to the fight pit as they could. An announcer was shouting above the noise of the crowd, “Next we have the fearsome Finrod against Feanor!” “It doesn’t look like Chalin is fighting this round,” stated Natolyth, “I guess we’ll have to ask around…” Natolyth stopped because he realized he was talking to thin air. Wyndor had walked a few paces away and was staring with his mouth hanging open. “What are you doing?” Natolyth asked? “Have you ever seen anyone so beautiful?” asked Wyndor. He was staring at a woman across the fighting pit from them. “Hold on there Wyndor, we’re here to find Chalin remember?” Natolyth said restrainingly. “Yeah, yeah, of course,” answered Wyndor, “Uh, why don’t you go ask at the booth there, and I’ll ask some of the people in the crowd.” “Oh no you don’t,” replied Natolyth, “I’m not letting you walk around with Cupid’s arrow in your eye. We are both going to talk to the gentlemen at the booth.” Natolyth practically dragged Wyndor across the sand to get to the betting booth. Natolyth made some inquiries while Wyndor kept turning around to see if he could catch sight of the woman. “Ok, Chalin is up next Wyndor… Wyndor! Are you listening to me!” yelled Natolyth. “What? Oh, yes, yes. What did you say?” answered Wyndor. “I said, Chalin is one of the next contestants.” replied Natolyth while rolling his eyes. “What! Just like that we find him! It took me weeks of searching to find you and Chalin just shows up on a rooster?” “Well, assuming it’s the same Chalin that Gex was talking about, and assuming this Chalin is indeed our brother, then yes. Sorry to have been such a bother to rescue” Natolyth said as he zapped Wyndor. “Ouch!” yelped Wyndor, “Stop doing that! Ever since you gained these wizard powers you’ve been abusing me with them!” “I have not been abusing you,” answered Natolyth, “I’m just trying to keep you focused. We’ve traveled all this way to find our brother, let’s not get distracted now.” “You’re right” replied Wyndor, “let’s go find Chalin.” They made their way back to the ring and waited for Chalin to appear. As they settled in to watch, Wyndor realized they were standing next to the woman he had been watching earlier. “Hello, do you come here often?” asked Wyndor. “And who are you?” the woman asked. “I am stunned by your beauty.” answered Wyndor. “Well thank you, but I meant your name.” she said. “I am Wyndor Grahamson of Mitgardia and you have my service.” said Wyndor. “Well, Wyndor, I am Valanice of Avalonia and I will take your service and leave your flattery.” Valanice answered. At that moment the announcer stood up and snapped Wyndor out of his stupor for a moment. “And now,” shouted the announcer, “the champion you’ve all been waiting for… Chalin the Mitgardian!” The entire crowd cheered even louder and Chalin hopped over the edge of the ring and raised his arms to the cheering of the crowd. Chalin made quick work of his opponent and circled around the ring taking in the applause of his fans. Wyndor and Natolyth tried to be seen by Chalin and caught him just as he was exiting the arena. Chalin caught sight of his brothers and stopped in his tracks. “What are you doing here?” questioned Chalin. “We’re here to rescue you.” answered Wyndor. “Rescue? You both don’t understand; I don’t need any rescuing. It’s great to see you again, I didn’t think I ever would. But I’ve got a great life here. After the elemental attack I was captured by Kaliphlin pirates and brought here as a slave. The local government caught wind of what was going on and broke up the pirate’s activities and set me free. I didn’t have any way to get home so I signed up as a fighting pit contestant. And as you’ve probably heard, I’m quiet famous here.” explained Chalin. “But what about home?” asked Natolyth. “We can all go back together now. Our plan has been that as soon as we found you we would all travel back to Mitgardia.” “Home? How long has it been since we’ve been there? People there have moved on, I’m sure, and so have I. Thanks for coming to find me. It really is good to see you again, but I’ve got to get ready for my next fight. I’ll see you around if you ever come back to Kaliphlin.” And with that Chalin turned around and walked away. “Well what do we do now?” asked Natolyth. “I’m not sure Natolyth. This isn’t exactly how I imagined this meeting would go.” said Wyndor. He then noticed Valanice walking away from the arena. “But I’ve got a great idea for how to finish a different meeting.” Wyndor runs up to Valanice with Natolyth on his heels. “Lady Valanice, I am sorry for my rude departure earlier. When I offered you my service I meant it. Is there anything I can do for you?” “Well,” began Valanice, “I actually do need an escort back to my home in Avalonia. I was going to see if I could hire some guards in town, but (she says as she bates her eyes) if you’re offering, it would save me the trouble of having to find someone else.” “Don’t trouble yourself my lady, my brother and I would be happy to escort you.” answered Wyndor. Natolyth just rolled his eyes as if to say, “you are crazy, but I’ll go with you anyway.” Wyndor continued, “We are traveling back to Mitgardia anyway and it would be no trouble to take a detour through the fair country of Avalonia.” “I fear it may not be as fair as it once used to be” Valanice stated. “That is one reason I need an escort. Our land is overrun with soldier of the Hand of Corruption as well as Drow and other vile creatures. But if you are willing to go with me still I will see to it that my Uncle takes good care of you.” “We are your humble servants my Lady Valanice” said Wyndor and Natolyth just rolled his eyes again. They all headed towards the tents and pavilions that were set up as a camp near the fight pits and found horses and provisions for their journey. They had just set out towards the Oil Road when they heard the galloping of a single horse behind them. “Wait! Wait brothers! I’ve changed my mind!” called out the rider. The three travelers turned in their saddles to see Chalin racing up behind them. “I would be a fool not to go with my brothers, my family, and see them safely home” said Chalin as he caught up with them. “I for one am glad you are joining us Chalin” replied Natolyth. “We will need someone to help keep our brother sane.” “Lady Valanice, may I introduce my brother, Chalin” said Wyndor. “Chalin, this is the Lady Valanice whom we have agreed to escort back to her home in Avalonia. Are you still willing to join us?” “Whatever crazy adventure is ahead of us,” answered Chalin, “let’s do it together.”

Oh, I'm sorry. I didn't notice the new pictures. It looks good! I would vote for continuing on.

Wow. Just wow. I love the snot rock work inside. I need to learn better how to do that!